Personification

the door slamed (joel rabinovich p.8) nice and creative
(lorenzo sanchez p4)
The chair cried as he was put through the wood chipper (Samuel Fajardo P-7) Good example, you can also imagine the chair 'crying'. (camila toro p3) long but good example (cristina uribe p.7) Jajaja Good example. I can imagine the chair crying out for help. (Nicolas Triana p3)
The engine was whining from all the stress. (Mateo Osorio p.7) Very good I liked how you used sofisticated (Samuel Fajardo P-7) funny and you can also picture the engine (cristina uribe p.7)
The Lamp sat on the table (Ms. Shawn) I was pretty sure you would use something like this, Great!! (camila toro p3) i've heard it before but never really thought of it as personification! (cristina uribe p.7) I understand it perfectly, SAT is the personification (sofia escobar p4) its great, i understand it alot (valentina p8) I never tought of it as personification untill now (Candelaria p.1) It is a very good example of personification. (Mariana Buraglia P.3)Its a very good example and you can understand it (Marianne P.3) good example i can imagine the lamp sitting there (mariajose archila p7) pretty good one (joel rabinovich p.8) very good with vocabulary
(lorenzo sanchez p4) Very good letter(jeff p.4)
In toy story, the toys were sad since they didn´t play anymore (lorenzo muñoz P7)
The door silently closed (Bernie Szapiro p:2) Very good becasue doors don't choose to be loud or silent, the doer choose.(Samuel Fajardo P-7) how can a door close silently? clearly it is personification :) (sofia escobar p4) nice personification. (Laura Becerra p.4) doors can't be loud or quiet so good personification (Lorenza Galvis p1)(i dont understand it lauramejia p4) I like this personification! It explains itself very easy (Daniela Pedraza P.1) Its esy to understand and notice the personification (Candelaria p.1) Original example bernie (lorenzo muñoz P7)
as she hardly threw herself in the sofa the sofa started crying because it hurt (karen levy P2) jajaja funny, im sure that whoever sat in the sofa was overweight(lorenzo muñoz P7)
the fridge is calling me (cristina u p.7) Good because fridges cant call people exept for mine (Santiago Cabrera p.8)
The sunlight embraced my garden. (Antonta Pulido period 3) good word to decribe sunlight giving human qualities embraced (Laura Becerra p.4) the way we can relate. Very good (lorenza Galvis p1) Sunny and happy! (Armando G. Lugo Period 2) I liked this one ( arturo sarmiento p2) veryy nice(daniela canas p4) this is very well thought, also very well written ( Daniela Cepeda p.7) great example! (mariajose archila p7) its really original very good (gabriela montenegro p.4) Antonia great example very vivid and descriptive (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3)
The wind spoke to me ( Maria Villamizar p4) good description, of making the connection between noises of the wind and speaking (Laura Becerra p4) nice relly original (daniela canas p4) this is great! i like it alot (valentina p8) gives me a good picture in my mind (Sophie Steck p.7) Great, thought out and original. (camila toro p3)Great hard work and tone.( jeff p.4)
Very good the personification and good description( Felipe Mayorga p2)Very good personification( arturo sarmiento p2) Very good one ( Bernie Acevedo P.4)
We kept on dancing till the stars ran away (Laura Becerra p4) I think this one is very genuine. I had never thought of it before. great job (Alma Peñate P7)very good description ( Lorenza galvis p1) Oh, i get it! (Armando G. Lugo Period 2) I really understand this example ( maria Villamizar p4) Very good one creative.( Alejandra Urdaneta p.8) I like it!! Nice job! (Daniela Pedraza P.1) Nice mood, and atmosphere ( Daniela Cepeda p.7) (I like how you say the stars "ran away" when they just dissapear. Antonia Pulido period 3) very original and easy to understand(Bernie Szapiro P:2)
Screaming out my lungs(Lorenza Galvis p 1) Its good but its not so clear or easy to understand( Felipe Mayorga p2) I do understand it nice one ( Camilo Cano p.2) It is very good, it explains how load you are screaming in a clear manner. (Mariana Buraglia P.3)
The Table was so mad at me, that it screamed. (Juan Felipe Cleves p2) Is very good and easy to understand( Felipe Mayorga p2) short but really good ( Camilo Cano) i dont get it (tomas cardenas p.8) a table cant scream it sure is personification(Bernie Szapiro P2)
The thunder screamed to the earth (Roberto Guerrero P4) I thinks its easy to understand (gabriela montenegro p.4)
The TV started crying because of the sad movie (Felipe Mayorga p2) jajajjajajajajjajajaja very funny and original personification (bernie szapiro P:2) very creative and funny (valentina p8) very good example(andres silva p.3 I can see thhe personification good one (miguel posse p2) Love your art( jeff p.4)
The old car begged for a quick check-up ( Camilo Cano p.2) Good one, but it could be a little more clear ( Bernie Acevedo P.4 ) really good ( Maria villamizar p4) good one, i can picture the old car destroyed and begging for a check up (Isabel Botero P7) Good one, you can definetly visualize the situation (lorenzo muñoz P7)
My desk screamed each time i wrote something(camila villamilp1)
The car roard like a tiger(Arturo Samiento p2) Very original! I really like your personification :) (Maria Venegas P.2) very nice a car cant roar (bernie szapiro P:2) Very good one, very original ( Bernie Acevedo P.4 ) original and very good>( Alejandra Urdaneta p.8) I liked how you used personification nice Job! (Daniela Pedraza P.1) good example i really understand it(andres silva p.3)
My sisiters barbie doll stared at me! (Armando G. Lugo Period 2) scary to have a doll staring at you (bernie szapiro P:2) Like in a scary movie ( Camilo Cano p.2)Used in scary movies liked it ( arturo sarmiento p2) Very good example of personification ( Bernie Acevedo P.4 )creappy! (daniela canas p4) That hapens to me when I see a doll in the nnight with the lights off (Candelaria p.1) creepy example and easy to imagine ( gregory Goldemberg P.3)
The leaves raked the window (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3)
the sun smiled in the morning. (natalia martinez p.2) good one but not that clear (sofia escobar p4) i dont understand it very well ( mariana lozano p4) I like the picture you painted in my mind (Sophie Steckerl p.7)
The door sounded creepy (sofia escobar p4)this is a good one(very easy to understand Lorenzo CastellanosP.3)
(Esteban Villegas P.7) Very good example I like it. ( Alejandra Urdaneta p.8) I indeed like this omment, very original. (Nicolás Cruz P.1.)
The book close him because he was so bord ( Bernie Acevedo P.4) Wow I like it. Re-check how you wrote this frase. (Nicolás Cruz P.1.)
the wind dance with the leaves (daniela canas p4)(like it laura mejia p4) its funny like it (tomas cardenas p.8)i like it its short and easy to understand (laura michelsen p.1) I like it, it is very clear to understand. (Mariana Buraglia P.3) It is very easy to understand (Marianne P.3)
the computer is singing9lauramejiap4) so funny (tomas cardenas p,8)
I saw the leaves rush through the quiet forest. (Daniel Jursich p4)
People shouted quietly (Pablo Corredor P4 ) This is not an example ( maria villamizar p4 )a personification is something that gives human characteristics to objects not to humans (Felipe silva P.1) this is not right this is actually a paradox this is not a paradox ( Daniela Cepeda p.7) That's a paradox pablo (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3)
(Esteban Villegas P.7) This is no an example. It is a paradox. (Nicolas Triana p3)
Thats a paradox (Miguel Samper P 1)I dont understand it (laura micchelsen p.1) How is this personification (Marianne P.3) it is not a personification because people are not objects (mariajose archila p7)
The lion was talking to his clan (tomas cardenas p.8) Soso example, no so understandable( Antonio Cl P.8) This is not an Example because personification gives humans characteristics to objects (Felipe Silva P.1) very imaginative good job
(lorenzo sanchez p4)
The bees played hide and seek with the flowers as they buzzed from one to another. (SIMON ZAPATAP8) Very creative ( Miguel Samper P 1) Makes you feel very happy :D (Mateo Osorio p.7) Reminds me of a movie. (Alejandro Samper P3)
My paper ran away with the wind.(Alejandra Urdaneta p.8) great example very original (William Bergman p1)~ Simple, good, easy to understand (Mariana Buraglia P.3) great one. I had never heard this personification before. (Alma Peñate P7) This is a good,origional,example, that is easy to understand (Ashlyn P.7)
The lamps sits on the table (pablo ancizar p.8) Understandable ( Antonio Cl P.8) its a good personification ( mariana lozano p4) very xclear very simple (Sophie Steckerl p.7) This is good but not original ( Daniela Cepeda p.7) Short but easy to understand. The human characteristic is clear. (Maria Pombo P3)
The sun is every time following the moon(Steve Jaramillo p.8) Good understandable ( Antonio Cl P.8) Good example but incorrectly frased. (Mateo Osorio p7) Nice one but you should have written it "The sun is following the moon all the time" (Alejandro Samper P3)
the cuishon is sitting on the chair.(valentina p8) hahah very good personification 8 ( mariana lozano p4)ahhah like it easy to understand! (laura michelsen p.1 )
Ex. Math hepls to solve science ( Antonio Cl P.8) Very weak idea ( William Bergman p1) this isnt a personification(andres silva p.3) (I didn't understand it very quickly. You should elaborate more on it because it could be better. Antonia Pulido period 3) This doesn't make sense, it is not a personification (Jack Akerman) Could be strengthened, but I see what you're going towards. It's like math is being depicted as an assistant to science. (Sam Thomas - Period 3)
the lamp was riding a bicycle ( mariana lozano p4) this is not an example because a personificaton is human characteristics to objects (Felipe silva P.1) Mariana this is not a good example because personification is usually the normal "act" that the object is doing and it is described like and act of humans. How could a lamp posibly be riding a bicycle? (Ana Maria Samper P.7) Lamps can't ride in bicycles (Alejandro Samper P3)
The river ran down the mountain (Daniela Pedraza P.1) The example is very good and very awesome ( Miguel Samper P 1) I like this example because it describes a river perfectly. (Ashlyn P.7)
The wind whispered in my ear (Felipe Silva P.1) Good example I like it it was really clear ( William Bergman p1)
The shirt is just waiting for me to buy it ( Miguel Samper) This is an unclear example of a personification (Jack Akerman, Period 3) jajaja that always happens to me! (Daniela Velez P.1) good example!!! very creative1! (tatiana seinjet p.3)
tHE FISH LOOKED AT ME AND BEGGED ME NOT TO EAT IT WITH HIS EYES (LAURA MICHELSEN P.1) I don't understand this comment. (Nicolás Cruz P.1.) Funny to think about it like that hahaha (Claudia Beltran P.8)
The chair hit me... (Nicolás Cruz P.1.) good example for personification. I can imagine a chair hitting you! that can't happen! Good personification (isabel botero P7) Very creative! YOu can easily related to real life. (Maria Pombo P3)
As the air blew the leaves sang ( William Bergman p1) Very good becuase leaves can't whistle (Samuel Fajardo P-7) It is very good because you made a personification of 2 things in the same sentence! (Maria Vernaza P1)
Tv. is so funny (Candelaria p.1)
The air whistled through my hair (Mariana Buraglia P.3) I like this one because air cant whislte (Esteban Villegas P.7) Smart Esteban, I also like this example (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3)
The stone flew through the air (Marianne P.3) Very Good example!! (Mateo Osorio p.7) good one very original (miguel posse p2) (great example sebastian fernandez p3)
The cup and the wind fought until the cup lost. (Sophie Steckerl p.7) (I can tell that the wind knocked the cup over. Good example! Antonia Pulido period 3) good example its easy to see how the wind makes the cup fall (gregory Goldemberg p.3)
The wheels on the car screemed from all the the braking (Esteban Villegas P.7) It was complex and original (Roberto Guerrero P4) Very creative and original example. (Alejandro Samper P3)
The trees danced as the wind blew.. (camila toro p3) wow1 it is amazing. i can totally picture it and know what is happening. (Isabel botero P7) nice one, cami. very original! (Alma Peñate P7) I like it but I heard it before(Claudia Beltran P.8) I love it! Very poetic... (Ana Maria Samper P.7)
The apple couldn't stop shouting when I took the first bite. (gabriela montenegro p.4 ) good and original example (gregory Goldemberg P.3)
the drops of rain were comiting suicide (Isabel Botero P7) Really good example, but you could change 'drops of rain' to 'raindrops' (Jack Akerman, Period 3) weird way of looking at it, i would rather describe them as being brutally assasinated by nature :) (daniel m p3)
I could feel the morning breeze running through my whole body. (Alma Peñate P7)
the stars danced through the dark sky ( Daniela Cepeda p.7) This is a good one. I would'nt think of one like this one. (Esteban R. P.2) Great one! I was also gonna do one of stars but I would have never thought of that one! (Ana Maria Samper P.7)
The flowers gazed at the sun (Jack Akerman, Period 3) this is a good example and makes a lot of sence. (Ashlyn P.7) Good example - and perfectly worded in my opinion. (Sam Thomas - Period 3) Very good! I like it! (Maria Vernaza P1)
The clouds started crying(andres silva p.3) Really good Personification! (Esteban R. P.2) good one!! it was raining!! (tatiana seinjet p.3) ohh i like this! very creative! (Rachel Coombs pd.7)
The toast Jumped out of the toaster (Ashlyn P.7) very original (Roberto Guerrero P4) Very Creative (Esteban R. P.2) Very original! I use it very often but I never thought of it as a personification. (Maria Pombo P3) haha funny i like it (Rachel Coombs pd.7)
The trees dance with the wind. (Esteban R. P.2) Someone already used this one before(Claudia Beltran P.8) The wind is a good partner, is it not?! (Dan Sanclemente. P.-1.)
The chair cried because they broke her a leg (Carlos Olarte p.8) (Copied from the first one and not very clear Lorenzo Castellanos P.3)
The dry leaves finally tasted water (Claudia Beltran P.8) i wish they could (Pablo Tello P.1) Love this one - it's like a message of hope as well as personification - hey, allegory! very creative! (sofia aldana p.2) i like it very creative (beatriz pena p.7)
The wind was singing sadly. (Ana Maria Samper P.7) nice example! (Pablo Tello P.1)Good one Ramon p.3 That is a nice example it is understandable, not that simple or that hard, and it is also poetic, great job. (Felipe Sanchez P-7)
When the PS3 went on sale, it flew off the shelves. (Alejandro Samper P3) so true (Pablo Tello P.1)(Good one because it sounds original and shows effort Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) Very good example. incredible example! it is very descriptive and creative (Daniela Velez P.1)
My piggy bank had a good meal today. ( Mariajose Archila P7) jajaja i like it a lot very creative and unique (karen levy P2) i like it and you can easily see what you're talking about! (sofia aldana p.2) excellent and very creative (daniel m p3) very nice and creative tomas urrutia p.1)
The snowman at first stood high and proud, but it was a warm day, and he hurriedly melted. (Sam Thomas - Period 3) very creative i like it a lot (karen levy P2) i really like it its easy to understand and creative. (gabriela montenegro p.4) very original Sam, it is very good! (Maria Vernaza P1) very creative! i love it (beatriz pena p.7) Excellent job! (Dan Sanclemente. P.-1.)
The toilet begged for help and later drowned after the fat man left the bathroom (Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) great example! (karen levy P2) It doesn't make sense (sofia aldana p.2)Ewwwwww I got nausas. Ramon p 3 Nice example Sam. Very clear. (Nicolas Triana p3)
The tree's branches hung down in weariness (sofia aldana p.2) I don t get it Ramon . p 3 Like! i have seen them! (Daniela Velez P.1)
the wind whistled a sweet melody, and whispered secret words never told before (daniel m p39
The punching bag begged to be stoped punched. Ramon P.3 good one (miguel posse p2) this is gramatically incorrect. (Rachel Coombs pd.7)
the moon is sleeping tonight (Daniela Velez P.1)
The moon guided me through the dark. (Maria Pombo P3) great example!!!(tatiana seinjet p.3) nice example(sebastian fernandez p3)
when i go to sleep it feels like if my bed hugs me (miguel posse p2)
i like it (daniela canas p.4)
when the shoes went on sale, they flew off the shelves(tatiana seinjet p.3)
My chair just keeps pushing me off it! (Maria Vernaza P1) good example i can picture it! (beatriz pena p.7) very funny and original tomas urrutia p.1) It has a little of a hyperbole to(Juan Felipe Zuletap2)
that sound very funny (daniela canas p.4)
The wind whispers as it blows past me. (Rachel Coombs pd.7) Great example(Juan Felipe Zuletap2)
time flew and before i knew it, it was time for me to go home (beatriz pena p.7) nice example(sebastian fernandez p3)
the book screamed in agony as the fire ate it (Gregory Goldemberg P.3)
i like very creative (daniela canas p.4)
Extremist at a bit, but you give a situation which makes it a great example, keep on with the good job! (Felipe Sanchez P-7)
lightning smiled as it iluminated the earth(sebastian fernandez p3)
That Academy Award is waiting for me to take him home. (Nicolas Triana p3) Good example! (Dan Sanclemente. P.-1.)
the song started to dance (daniela canas p.4)
The wind runs as fast as he can, with the intention of winning the race! (Dan Sanclemente. P.-1.) creative and original :D (tomas urrutia p.1) I like your extention, giving the wind not only actions but motives. (Felipe Sanchez P-7)Liked it detailed and long loooks like younput a lot of thought in it ! good! (juliana laborde p3)


the waves were hitting the sand harshly (tomas urrutia p.1) good example (mathias kling p.1) really creative and easy to understand (mariana buraglia P.3)
The moon was making the ocean move (mathias kling p.1) Easy to understand (mariana buraglia P.3) Good! interesting and esasy to get )juliana laborde p3)


The horrible smell creeped into my nose. (Felipe Sanchez P-7) very creative (mathias kling p.1) detailed and good easy to spot (juliana laborde p.3)
Her life passed her by. (mariana buraglia P.3)
Last night my dog and I had a long talk (Maria Venegas p.2) good example (mathias kling p.1)
Understandable (Santiago Cabrera p.8) original, and creative (mariana buraglia P.3)

The moon smiles at the fish ( Santiago Cabrera p.8)nice example(carlos riascos p.8.)
the T.V. roared(carlos riascos p.8.) A goodd example that we have all experienced.Juan Felipe Zuletap2)

The lamp sat on the table(Juan Felipe Zuletap2)
The car would nt respond(Juan Felipe Zuleta p2)
The mona lisa looked at me(Juan Felpe Zuletap2)
If I gave the sky a hug, so it would stop crying. (juliana laborde p3)