lorenzo loves licking lucas (lorenzo muñoz P7) nice example very creative (lorenzo sanchez p4) very good example (Carlos Riascos p.8)
bubble bath besides boar (joel rabinovich P.8) Good example, its comicall due to its randomness (Felipe Sanchez P-8)
liam licked a liar's leg (Mateo Galvis p3) (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3) good but wierd example, licking legs... also applies to imagery. Good example! you only used one word without the "L" amazing! i like it even though I can't imagine liam licking a liars leg! (isabel Botero P7) Interesting example, yet good (Jack Akerman, Period 3) That one freaked me out but very good one(felipemayorgap2 )
Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers (Ms. Shawn) This is not original (Ms Shawn) I already knew it (Sofia Escobar p4) That one is a classic tounge twister! (Armando G. Lugo Period 2) Very good one! Although it is not an original (Mariajose Archila P7) I had heard it before(arturo sarmiento p2) not original (Mariana Romero p4) 10 bucks to anyone who can say that 3 times in 3 secons (gabriel posada p4) um this had already been made up by somebody (Rachel Coombs pd.7) Lame, ordinary example (Jack Akerman, Period 3) JAJAJA thats classic , funny and easy to understand( felipe mayorga p2) Too repetitive. (Nicolas Triana p3)
Bernie beat a billionaire's Bugatti but bullied him ( Bernie Szapiro p:2) Very original, i like it (sofia escobar p4) Very Funny Bernie! Where did you come up with that? (Armando G. Lugo Period 2)( Bernie, I liked it but you can do better) really really fun and creative berns ( Camilo Cano p.2) Its really creative, funnny and original(gabriela montenegro p.4)oh, u use ur name haha (gabriel posada p4) (A bit confusing but fun to read Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) Not easy to understand but a good one ( Felipe mayorga p2) Baby Bumble Bee Blows Bubbles in the Bath Tub (Armando G. Lugo Period 2) very nice and funny tomas urrutia p-1) Very good and orignal (Bernie Szapiro p:2) good to know !! (sebastian onorop p.2) i think its very original. (gabriela montenegro p.4) This is very creative (Roberto Guerrero P.4) Creative ( Antonio Cl P.8) jaja i like this example(andres silva p.3) veary good exam[le and very original(Carlos Olarte P.8) Sofia sasson sadly splashed some syrup.(Sofia Aldana period 2) good example!! unique!(tatiana seinjet p.3)Liked that every word started with S (Arturo sarmiento p2)cool (gabriel psoada p4) (Creative and good because of the extra adjective Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) i like it a lot very creative (karen levy P2) I like how you used the s alliteration! Dan Sanclemente. P.-1.
Big Beanie Babies Bought a Blue Book Bag. (Antonia Pulido period 3) very good (Lorenza Galvis p1) I thought you coould do better... ( Camilo Cano p.2) Good example Antonia, but a little confusing at first. (camila toro p3) Good example but not very clear (Mariajose Archila P7) Good Examples but it doesn't make any sense.. but still creative! (Daniela Velez P.1)
To talk to turtles twsist tongue to translate the turtle tingling time (Laura Becerra p.4) very original I like it a lot (Lorenza Galvis p1 ) it is hard to sayyy... that is very cool and creative.. (karen levy(p.2 Very cool one liked that it is longer than the rest(arturo sarmiento p2) i like the repetion! (sofia escobar p4) How fun! (Claudia Beltran p.8) This one is very well thought! I like it! (Daniela Cepeda P. 7)
My mom makes me many muffins. ( Maria Villamizar p4) very logical and good tomas urrutia p.1) very well thought (Lorenza Galvis p1) nice example seems cool that your mom makes you muffins. (sebastian onoro I really like it! it is very creative( Silvia Loboguerrero p.2) like it becauase its a sentance that you would use and not like wierd (Mariana Romero p4) I like this because it sounds ool when you say it and all the words you used start with "M", i like it alot and it gives voice to your sentence (Isabel Botero P7) This is a good and very easy to understand example, reminds me of my mom's muffins! (Sam Thomas - Period 3)
Mariana Mora melted my money. (Lorenza Galvis p1) very wierd! but i liked how every word started with "m" (sofia aldana p.2)(very creative and original! (karen levy p.2) good use with words it sound creative! (sebastian onoro p.2) (I like it, it is short but you can see the alliteration clearly! Daniela Cepeda P. 7) I liked that every word started with M and it was very creative (Ashlyn Nolan P.7) I like the use of the m alliteration. Just like mine! Dan Sanclemente. P.-1. Louis Liam and Lara lessond long laying lions (karen levy p.2) I like your idea! very creative ( Silvia Loboguerrero p.2) I did not understand it ( Camilo Cano p.2)very creative (bernie acevedo p.4) this is silly but nice (callie campbell P.1)
My mother melted mini marshmellows. (Silvia Loboguerrero p.2) now I am hungry! very creative! (sofia aldana period 2) yoummy to my tummy! very original (karen levy p.2) I really like it!(Maria Venegas P.2) I love it and really like that you came up with it (Candelaria P.1) (Easy to understand and quite interesting Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) Yum soungs very good haha good example (Mariajose Archila P7) Very clear and simple...Good example! (Paula Jaramillo P.3)
Bernie backed banana bread (arturo sarmiento p2) nice alliteration really original (felipe angarita p.4) has a great rhyme(santiago salem p.4) I liked the example (Alejandro Samper P.3)
Juan jogged jumping jollyranchers (Lorenzo Sanchez p4) i like jolly ranchers tomas urrutia p.1) how did you come uop with that its very good (gabriela montenergo p.4) It is very good, and good vocabulary (Roberto Guerrero p4) Very good one ( bernie acevedo p.4) Good one ( Antonio Cl P.8) Very creative and it is a good example of alliteration. (Maria Pombo P3)
Laura loved living life.(gabriela montenegro p.4)Very nice and hippie-like :) (Ana Maria Samper P.7) good example especially because it is one that authors would use(andres silva p.3). Simple but very good! ( Daniela Cepeda P. 7) Very original, I think it´s very creative (Candelaria P.1)
Betty Butter Brought Butter (Mark Szapiro p4) it is good (felipe angarita p.4)very original ( rafael echavarria p.4 ) creative! (Claudia Beltran p.8)
ballack backed before ball bounced (felipe angarita p.4) nice and creative, good main idea (lorenzo sanchez p4) good idea (bernie acevedo p.4) This is a great thoughtful example, nice job! (camila toro p3)
Sofia saw seashels in the shore (sofia escobar p4) nice that you used your name (Mariana Romero p4) very original i like it ( mariana lozano p4) Good example but I think it is too similar to an already existing tounge twister (Maria Pombo P3)
seashells smack silently so seahorses swim sorrowding them. (Mariana Romero p4) very creative (mariana lozano p4) Very good example ( Miguel Samper P10) oooo i like it very creayttive and thought very welll nice job :) ( laura michelsen p.1)
Dearly Dancing Distant Ducklet (Daniel Jursich p4) it is very good and creative ( mariana lozano p4) very original (bernie acevedo p.4) Good example original ( Antonio Cl P.8) very creative(sebastian fernandez p3) You really put a lot of discription, and clarity into this! I like it! Dan Sanclemente. P.-1.
fat fred farted (gabriel posada p4) good main idea, but very short (lorenzo sanchez p4) Lorenzo stop being so negative, i mean sombody ddi their best work! (Santiago Cabrera p.8 ) HAHAHAHA VERY FUNNY (Mateo Galvis p3)
Robert Ran to Rio Rabbit Res erve (Roberto Guerrero P.4) nice and creative, like the vocabulary (lorenzo sanchez p4) really creative and and original, could be a tounge twister (Callie Campbell P.1) It is creative and makes sense (Miguel Samper P4)
santiago salem saw a sword (santiao salem p.4) nice and creative but very short (lorenzo sanchez p4)
Bernie bought brownies (bernie acevedo p.4) Bernie that was awsome!( Santiago Cabrera p.8) Good example) good example(sebastian fernandez p3) Good example used with yourself, but could've been longer. (camila toro p3) that was short(andres silva p.3)
(Antonio Cl P.8) Very thoughtful! (Ana Maria Samper P.7) Like it! The allegory is seen clearly! (Daniela Cepeda P. 7) Too short but good. (Nicolas Triana p3)
mariana made muffins (mariana lozano p4) it is simple but it is very good (maria vernaza p1) it's good and short (Rachel Coombs pd.7)
carlos cooks cakes (Carlos Olarte p.8) not very creative (Claudia Beltran p.8) very simple but it works (maria vernaza p1)
Steve Slacked Super Slaker on. (Santiago Cabrera p.8) Liked how the assonance works well (Pablo Ancizar p.8) what's a slaker? (callie campbell P.1)
Peper, Piter, Peter, and Pepe like Persians(Pablo Ancizar P.8) Very funny! (Ana Maria Samper P.7) This is very common ( Daniela Cepeda P.7) Umm i'm not sure if piter is a word, but it was a good example. (Rachel Coombs pd.7) That is an unusual example, original indeed (Felipe Sanchez P-7) i like it its very original (daniela canas p-4)
Ex. Math motivates movement of mathematical answes. ( Antonio Cl P.8)
She sells seashells by the seashore ( Carlos Olarte p.8) it is like a tongue twister and it is very good (maria vernaza p1) I loved it! it seems like a tongue twister... amazing example (Daniela Pedraza P.1)n Good example! it is like a tongue twister and it makes sense but I think I had already heard of it (Isabel Botero P7) Good it is a tongue twister . (Samuel Fajardo P-7) Great idea! using tongue twisters as an alliteration example (Jack Akerman, Period 3) I love it but I think I heard it in the Sally tounge twister still a good idea(Candelaria P.1) Good examples but I have herd it a lot before. (Ashlyn Nolan p.7)
Simon says sit softly (Simon Zapata) very good example since you just used words with s (maria vernaza p1)
Baking Brownies with Butter (Ana Maria Samper) I think this idea is very creative and original. (Alma Peñate P7) It is a good example that sounds like somthing you would say normaly. (Ashlyn Nolan P.7) Good example! It's short and gets to the point. (Rachel Coombs pd.7) yummmm! (daniela canas p-4)
Betty Botter bought some butter for her batter. (Callie Campbell P.1) Good i like how it is about cooking. (Samuel Fajardo P-7)
ship trip lip (Pablo Tello P.1) Like it a lot!!! great example (Daniela Pedraza P.1) Good one but this is a rhyme. not an alliteration (Alma Peñate P7) This is a rhyme, an alliteration has repeated consonants (Alejandro Samper P.3) Maria made music moving maracas (maria vernaza p1) Like how you used yourself for the example! great! (Daniela Pedraza P.1) really good example(sebastian fernandez p3)i like it! very simple and fun also creative i love it (laura michelsen p.1) Great and simple example! (Alejandro Samper P.3) Great example! it relies a lot to you! (Daniela Velez P.1)
Daniel doesn't draw dogs. (Daniela Pedraza P.1) Make the idea clearer ( Miguel Samper P1) Great Example Daniela (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3)
Barney, biggest born Beaver (MIguel Samper P1) (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3) Nice and Funny Samper. jajajajajajjja very funny alliteriation (Samuel Fajardo P-7)
I love long, leaky lakes (Alma Peñate P7)simple short and easy to understand...i like it :) (laura michelsen p.1) very good example (nicole hemelberg p.2)
Pedro Punches Pablo Perez (andres silva p3) good example andres(sebastian fernandez p3) (Nice Example Andres i like punching pablo perez) funny great example (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3) Very nice example using a very common happening. (Nicolás Cruz P.1.) excellent example, itr is creative and very complete (lorenzo sanchez p4)
sam saw a saucer soring(sebastian fernandez p3) it really doesn't make any sence but it's still an alliteration (Alma Peñate P7) good example sebastian ive seen sams name in many examples(andres silva p.3) sebastian seduces super sad saggy sheep named steve sanchez (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3) jajajajajajajaja Very funny and creative (Felipe Silva P.1) jack jumped just over the jet. (sebastian onoro p.2) Nice but I would of used more conjunctions with j (Daniel Jursich P. 4)Very good example sebastian (Felipe Silva P.1) Very creative (Marianne P.3) good example creative (nicole hemelberg p.2) to tickle tigers try to use turtles (Isabel Botero P7) Nice, funny example and very creative, very funny. (Nicolás Cruz P.1.)
camila came to california cold (camila villamil P-1) Sam says he saw some super soft sofas. (camila toro good exmple camila (andres silva p.3) Very complete example! (Esteban R. P.2) I saw the same sea saw swinging over ( Daniela Cepeda P.7) Nice example and very creative, I think the most creative of this page. (Nicolás Cruz P.1.)
Sam sought a super sensation soccer ball (Samuel Fajardo P-7) good example! ( Esteban R. P.2) very creative (miguel posse p2 ) Marlyin Monroe met my minnie Minnie Mouse mupets.(Laura michelsen p.1) Hilarious.Ramonp 3. good example!! very creative! (tatiana seinjet p.3) Cook Cooky cooks cakes and cookies (Jack Akerman, Period 3) Very god example (Marianne P.3) Betty Bitt Buttered Bread (Candelaria P.1) Nicolás needed negated nerv necesity. (Nicolás Cruz P.1.) doesnt really make sense (daniel moreno p3)
Fred the Frog Fried some French Fries (Ashlyn Nolan P.7) Very good and creative (Felipe silva P.1) Creative. Ramon P3 I like it! Ver creative (Paula Jaramillo P.3)
birds bite big bikes (felipe silva P.1) Good example (Marianne P.3) very creative i like it (beatriz pena p.7) Very original (mariana buraglia P.3)
My mother misunderstood me (Marianne P.3) Good one! (Esteban R. P.2) Good example, could happen easily in real life. (Maria Pombo P3)
Alejandro and Alejandra are at Andino. ( Esteban R. P.2) Not original. Ramon p 3
Many men make mixed mushrooms (Maria Pombo P3) Nice! (Pablo Tello P.1) good one (miguel posse p2) reminds me of mario (Mateo Osorio P.7) awkward, but good (lorenzo muñoz P7)
sherry picked cherries from the cherry tree (gregory Goldemberg P.3) Peter Piper Picked a Peck of Pickled Peppers (Alejandro Samper P3) Heard it before, either way really nice! (Pablo Tello P.1) ive heard it before (beatriz pena p.7) not very original but good example (gregory goldemberg P.3) her it before, not very original (Nicole Hemelberg P.2) Sweet smell of success (Claudia Beltran A bit short but good one! (Sam Thomas - Period 3) very good one (Nicole Hemelberg p.2) Great example, i've heard it before but until now never realized it was alliteration. (Felipe sanchez P-7) Beard beacon brownies become bitter, Ramon. p 3 hahahahahaha nice one ramon! (Pablo Tello P.1) jajajaja funny one (miguel posse) Nice, but i dont think it makes sense... (Mateo Osorio P.7) tongue twisters take time to terminate (Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) Haha good one and so true! (Sam Thomas - Period 3) funny example (daniel moreno p3) Yodeling Yaks Yearned to Yap at Yorkshires (Sam Thomas - Period 3) I specially like letter y (daniel moreno p3) very creative example( Gregory Goldemberg P.3)
My mother moved my money to Mexico. (Mariajose Archila P7) Very creative but a little wierd (sofia aldana p.2) sounds like a mobster (daniel m p3) I like it a lot! it is very original! (Daniela Velez P.1) very unique and creative! great example!!(tatiana seinjet p.3) Made me laugh (Paula Jaramillo P.3) Very funny (mariana buraglia P.3) its good but sounds mysterious (Esteban Villegas p.7)
soccer super star samir plays for manchester city(miguel posse p3 ) I like it, but samir is not a superstar, silva is(lorenzo muñoz P7) has he had hot dogs?? (daniel moreno p3) Yes i have. good one (Mateo Osorio P.7) cats come cooking caramel cookies creatively. (Daniela Velez P.1) sweet ;) in like 3 ways (sophie stecker. p,7)
camilo cant draw cats (Camilo Cano p.2) Really. No I'm just teasing. They are actually very hard to draw. (Nicolas Triana p3) My mother makes me mad ( Felipe Mayorga p2) Lol this is a really creative one ( Esteban Villegas p.7) they twirl through the temple(tatiana seinjet p.3) i really like it good example (beatriz pena p.7) i like it, it has both T and TH (sophie stecker. p,7) Great, very creative (mariana buraglia P.3)
Maria made mexican tacos for mariana (mariana buraglia P.3) Baby butterflies build beautiful buildings (beatriz pena p.7) Liked this one alot tuogh to understand but made me laugh good job. (Juliana LAborde p.3)
perry purred until peter picked perry up. (Rachel Coombs pd.7) How much wood would a woodchuck chuck if a woodchuck could chuck wood? (Mateo Osorio P.7) very good example and hard tongue twister (gregory Goldemberg P.3 CLASSIC. tongue twister/ alliteration... amazing (sophie stecker. p,7)
Bobby blows big balloons (Nicole Hemelberg P.2) Nice! makes sense and rymthes I liked that you used all of the same letters. (Juliana LAborde p.3) This has a good rhyme and make sense (Estban Villegas p.7)
Many must measure megalithic megaliths many Mondays. Dan Sanclemente. P.-1. Dan, you and your comments always leave me impressed, good (lorenzo muñoz P7)
The lazy, lonely, loose lizard licked lemons (Felipe sanchez P-7) I liked this because it makes sense and it has humor also, it was interesting! (Juliana LAborde p.3)
Beware, big bears behind my bed. (Paula Jaramillo P.3) nice one i like it veyr original (daniela canas P-4)
Bob bought bread and ate it by the Byscaine Boulevard. (Nicolas Triana p3) i like it but you have a lot of words that dont start with the letter B (cristina uribe p.7) laura likes lemon lollipops (daniela canas p.4) i love lemon pops! very original (cristina uribe p.7)
Tomas tried to take terry to the track.(Carlos Riascos p.8) good example, like how it makes sense (cristina uribe p.7) good example (mathias kling p.1)
Carlos can create cans Tomas urrutia p.1)
the shy, sad, sassy squirrel saw something scary. (cristina uribe p.7)
I like to lick ice. (mathias kling p.1)
The jell-o jiggled as it jogged (sophie Steckerl p.) Very original and creative sophie's so smart, and sarcastic since summer.< ec? :) (Juliana Laborde p.3)
MAria moans when mergio mamos moves (Juliana Laborde p.3)
Alices aunt ate apples and acorns around August (Esteban Villegas p.7)
bubble bath besides boar (joel rabinovich P.8) Good example, its comicall due to its randomness (Felipe Sanchez P-8)
liam licked a liar's leg (Mateo Galvis p3) (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3) good but wierd example, licking legs... also applies to imagery. Good example! you only used one word without the "L" amazing! i like it even though I can't imagine liam licking a liars leg! (isabel Botero P7) Interesting example, yet good (Jack Akerman, Period 3) That one freaked me out but very good one(felipemayorgap2 )
Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers (Ms. Shawn) This is not original (Ms Shawn) I already knew it (Sofia Escobar p4) That one is a classic tounge twister! (Armando G. Lugo Period 2) Very good one! Although it is not an original (Mariajose Archila P7) I had heard it before(arturo sarmiento p2) not original (Mariana Romero p4) 10 bucks to anyone who can say that 3 times in 3 secons (gabriel posada p4) um this had already been made up by somebody (Rachel Coombs pd.7) Lame, ordinary example (Jack Akerman, Period 3) JAJAJA thats classic , funny and easy to understand( felipe mayorga p2) Too repetitive. (Nicolas Triana p3)
Bernie beat a billionaire's Bugatti but bullied him ( Bernie Szapiro p:2) Very original, i like it (sofia escobar p4) Very Funny Bernie! Where did you come up with that? (Armando G. Lugo Period 2)( Bernie, I liked it but you can do better) really really fun and creative berns ( Camilo Cano p.2) Its really creative, funnny and original(gabriela montenegro p.4)oh, u use ur name haha (gabriel posada p4) (A bit confusing but fun to read Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) Not easy to understand but a good one ( Felipe mayorga p2)
Baby Bumble Bee Blows Bubbles in the Bath Tub (Armando G. Lugo Period 2) very nice and funny tomas urrutia p-1) Very good and orignal (Bernie Szapiro p:2) good to know !! (sebastian onorop p.2) i think its very original. (gabriela montenegro p.4) This is very creative (Roberto Guerrero P.4) Creative ( Antonio Cl P.8) jaja i like this example(andres silva p.3) veary good exam[le and very original(Carlos Olarte P.8)
Sofia sasson sadly splashed some syrup.(Sofia Aldana period 2) good example!! unique!(tatiana seinjet p.3)Liked that every word started with S (Arturo sarmiento p2)cool (gabriel psoada p4) (Creative and good because of the extra adjective Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) i like it a lot very creative (karen levy P2) I like how you used the s alliteration! Dan Sanclemente. P.-1.
Big Beanie Babies Bought a Blue Book Bag. (Antonia Pulido period 3) very good (Lorenza Galvis p1) I thought you coould do better... ( Camilo Cano p.2) Good example Antonia, but a little confusing at first. (camila toro p3) Good example but not very clear (Mariajose Archila P7) Good Examples but it doesn't make any sense.. but still creative! (Daniela Velez P.1)
To talk to turtles twsist tongue to translate the turtle tingling time (Laura Becerra p.4) very original I like it a lot (Lorenza Galvis p1 ) it is hard to sayyy... that is very cool and creative.. (karen levy(p.2 Very cool one liked that it is longer than the rest(arturo sarmiento p2) i like the repetion! (sofia escobar p4) How fun! (Claudia Beltran p.8) This one is very well thought! I like it! (Daniela Cepeda P. 7)
My mom makes me many muffins. ( Maria Villamizar p4) very logical and good tomas urrutia p.1) very well thought (Lorenza Galvis p1) nice example seems cool that your mom makes you muffins. (sebastian onoro I really like it! it is very creative( Silvia Loboguerrero p.2) like it becauase its a sentance that you would use and not like wierd (Mariana Romero p4) I like this because it sounds ool when you say it and all the words you used start with "M", i like it alot and it gives voice to your sentence (Isabel Botero P7) This is a good and very easy to understand example, reminds me of my mom's muffins! (Sam Thomas - Period 3)
Mariana Mora melted my money. (Lorenza Galvis p1) very wierd! but i liked how every word started with "m" (sofia aldana p.2) (very creative and original! (karen levy p.2) good use with words it sound creative! (sebastian onoro p.2) (I like it, it is short but you can see the alliteration clearly! Daniela Cepeda P. 7) I liked that every word started with M and it was very creative (Ashlyn Nolan P.7) I like the use of the m alliteration. Just like mine! Dan Sanclemente. P.-1.
Louis Liam and Lara lessond long laying lions (karen levy p.2) I like your idea! very creative ( Silvia Loboguerrero p.2) I did not understand it ( Camilo Cano p.2)very creative (bernie acevedo p.4) this is silly but nice (callie campbell P.1)
My mother melted mini marshmellows. (Silvia Loboguerrero p.2) now I am hungry! very creative! (sofia aldana period 2) yoummy to my tummy! very original (karen levy p.2) I really like it!(Maria Venegas P.2) I love it and really like that you came up with it (Candelaria P.1) (Easy to understand and quite interesting Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) Yum soungs very good haha good example (Mariajose Archila P7) Very clear and simple...Good example! (Paula Jaramillo P.3)
Bernie backed banana bread (arturo sarmiento p2) nice alliteration really original (felipe angarita p.4) has a great rhyme(santiago salem p.4) I liked the example (Alejandro Samper P.3)
Juan jogged jumping jollyranchers (Lorenzo Sanchez p4) i like jolly ranchers tomas urrutia p.1) how did you come uop with that its very good (gabriela montenergo p.4) It is very good, and good vocabulary (Roberto Guerrero p4) Very good one ( bernie acevedo p.4) Good one ( Antonio Cl P.8) Very creative and it is a good example of alliteration. (Maria Pombo P3)
Laura loved living life.(gabriela montenegro p.4)Very nice and hippie-like :) (Ana Maria Samper P.7) good example especially because it is one that authors would use(andres silva p.3). Simple but very good! ( Daniela Cepeda P. 7) Very original, I think it´s very creative (Candelaria P.1)
Betty Butter Brought Butter (Mark Szapiro p4) it is good (felipe angarita p.4)very original ( rafael echavarria p.4 ) creative! (Claudia Beltran p.8)
ballack backed before ball bounced (felipe angarita p.4) nice and creative, good main idea (lorenzo sanchez p4) good idea (bernie acevedo p.4) This is a great thoughtful example, nice job! (camila toro p3)
Sofia saw seashels in the shore (sofia escobar p4) nice that you used your name (Mariana Romero p4) very original i like it ( mariana lozano p4) Good example but I think it is too similar to an already existing tounge twister (Maria Pombo P3)
seashells smack silently so seahorses swim sorrowding them. (Mariana Romero p4) very creative (mariana lozano p4) Very good example ( Miguel Samper P10) oooo i like it very creayttive and thought very welll nice job :) ( laura michelsen p.1)
Dearly Dancing Distant Ducklet (Daniel Jursich p4) it is very good and creative ( mariana lozano p4) very original (bernie acevedo p.4) Good example original ( Antonio Cl P.8) very creative(sebastian fernandez p3) You really put a lot of discription, and clarity into this! I like it! Dan Sanclemente. P.-1.
fat fred farted (gabriel posada p4) good main idea, but very short (lorenzo sanchez p4) Lorenzo stop being so negative, i mean sombody ddi their best work! (Santiago Cabrera p.8 ) HAHAHAHA VERY FUNNY (Mateo Galvis p3)
Robert Ran to Rio Rabbit Res erve (Roberto Guerrero P.4) nice and creative, like the vocabulary (lorenzo sanchez p4) really creative and and original, could be a tounge twister (Callie Campbell P.1) It is creative and makes sense (Miguel Samper P4)
santiago salem saw a sword (santiao salem p.4) nice and creative but very short (lorenzo sanchez p4)
Bernie bought brownies (bernie acevedo p.4) Bernie that was awsome!( Santiago Cabrera p.8) Good example) good example(sebastian fernandez p3) Good example used with yourself, but could've been longer. (camila toro p3) that was short(andres silva p.3)
(Antonio Cl P.8) Very thoughtful! (Ana Maria Samper P.7) Like it! The allegory is seen clearly! (Daniela Cepeda P. 7) Too short but good. (Nicolas Triana p3)
mariana made muffins (mariana lozano p4) it is simple but it is very good (maria vernaza p1) it's good and short (Rachel Coombs pd.7)
carlos cooks cakes (Carlos Olarte p.8) not very creative (Claudia Beltran p.8) very simple but it works (maria vernaza p1)
Steve Slacked Super Slaker on. (Santiago Cabrera p.8) Liked how the assonance works well (Pablo Ancizar p.8) what's a slaker? (callie campbell P.1)
Peper, Piter, Peter, and Pepe like Persians(Pablo Ancizar P.8) Very funny! (Ana Maria Samper P.7) This is very common ( Daniela Cepeda P.7) Umm i'm not sure if piter is a word, but it was a good example. (Rachel Coombs pd.7) That is an unusual example, original indeed (Felipe Sanchez P-7) i like it its very original (daniela canas p-4)
Ex. Math motivates movement of mathematical answes. ( Antonio Cl P.8)
She sells seashells by the seashore ( Carlos Olarte p.8) it is like a tongue twister and it is very good (maria vernaza p1) I loved it! it seems like a tongue twister... amazing example (Daniela Pedraza P.1)n Good example! it is like a tongue twister and it makes sense but I think I had already heard of it (Isabel Botero P7) Good it is a tongue twister . (Samuel Fajardo P-7) Great idea! using tongue twisters as an alliteration example (Jack Akerman, Period 3) I love it but I think I heard it in the Sally tounge twister still a good idea(Candelaria P.1) Good examples but I have herd it a lot before. (Ashlyn Nolan p.7)
Simon says sit softly (Simon Zapata) very good example since you just used words with s (maria vernaza p1)
Baking Brownies with Butter (Ana Maria Samper) I think this idea is very creative and original. (Alma Peñate P7) It is a good example that sounds like somthing you would say normaly. (Ashlyn Nolan P.7) Good example! It's short and gets to the point. (Rachel Coombs pd.7) yummmm! (daniela canas p-4)
Betty Botter bought some butter for her batter. (Callie Campbell P.1) Good i like how it is about cooking. (Samuel Fajardo P-7)
ship trip lip (Pablo Tello P.1) Like it a lot!!! great example (Daniela Pedraza P.1) Good one but this is a rhyme. not an alliteration (Alma Peñate P7) This is a rhyme, an alliteration has repeated consonants (Alejandro Samper P.3)
Maria made music moving maracas (maria vernaza p1) Like how you used yourself for the example! great! (Daniela Pedraza P.1) really good example(sebastian fernandez p3)i like it! very simple and fun also creative i love it (laura michelsen p.1) Great and simple example! (Alejandro Samper P.3) Great example! it relies a lot to you! (Daniela Velez P.1)
Daniel doesn't draw dogs. (Daniela Pedraza P.1) Make the idea clearer ( Miguel Samper P1) Great Example Daniela (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3)
Barney, biggest born Beaver (MIguel Samper P1) (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3) Nice and Funny Samper. jajajajajajjja very funny alliteriation (Samuel Fajardo P-7)
I love long, leaky lakes (Alma Peñate P7)simple short and easy to understand...i like it :) (laura michelsen p.1) very good example (nicole hemelberg p.2)
Pedro Punches Pablo Perez (andres silva p3) good example andres(sebastian fernandez p3) (Nice Example Andres i like punching pablo perez) funny great example (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3) Very nice example using a very common happening. (Nicolás Cruz P.1.) excellent example, itr is creative and very complete (lorenzo sanchez p4)
sam saw a saucer soring(sebastian fernandez p3) it really doesn't make any sence but it's still an alliteration (Alma Peñate P7) good example sebastian ive seen sams name in many examples(andres silva p.3)
sebastian seduces super sad saggy sheep named steve sanchez (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3) jajajajajajajaja Very funny and creative (Felipe Silva P.1)
jack jumped just over the jet. (sebastian onoro p.2) Nice but I would of used more conjunctions with j (Daniel Jursich P. 4) Very good example sebastian (Felipe Silva P.1) Very creative (Marianne P.3) good example creative (nicole hemelberg p.2)
to tickle tigers try to use turtles (Isabel Botero P7) Nice, funny example and very creative, very funny. (Nicolás Cruz P.1.)
camila came to california cold (camila villamil P-1)
Sam says he saw some super soft sofas. (camila toro good exmple camila (andres silva p.3) Very complete example! (Esteban R. P.2)
I saw the same sea saw swinging over ( Daniela Cepeda P.7) Nice example and very creative, I think the most creative of this page. (Nicolás Cruz P.1.)
Sam sought a super sensation soccer ball (Samuel Fajardo P-7) good example! ( Esteban R. P.2) very creative (miguel posse p2 )
Marlyin Monroe met my minnie Minnie Mouse mupets.(Laura michelsen p.1) Hilarious.Ramonp 3. good example!! very creative! (tatiana seinjet p.3)
Cook Cooky cooks cakes and cookies (Jack Akerman, Period 3) Very god example (Marianne P.3)
Betty Bitt Buttered Bread (Candelaria P.1)
Nicolás needed negated nerv necesity. (Nicolás Cruz P.1.) doesnt really make sense (daniel moreno p3)
Fred the Frog Fried some French Fries (Ashlyn Nolan P.7) Very good and creative (Felipe silva P.1) Creative. Ramon P3 I like it! Ver creative (Paula Jaramillo P.3)
birds bite big bikes (felipe silva P.1) Good example (Marianne P.3) very creative i like it (beatriz pena p.7) Very original (mariana buraglia P.3)
My mother misunderstood me (Marianne P.3) Good one! (Esteban R. P.2) Good example, could happen easily in real life. (Maria Pombo P3)
Alejandro and Alejandra are at Andino. ( Esteban R. P.2) Not original. Ramon p 3
Many men make mixed mushrooms (Maria Pombo P3) Nice! (Pablo Tello P.1) good one (miguel posse p2) reminds me of mario (Mateo Osorio P.7) awkward, but good (lorenzo muñoz P7)
sherry picked cherries from the cherry tree (gregory Goldemberg P.3)
Peter Piper Picked a Peck of Pickled Peppers (Alejandro Samper P3) Heard it before, either way really nice! (Pablo Tello P.1) ive heard it before (beatriz pena p.7) not very original but good example (gregory goldemberg P.3) her it before, not very original (Nicole Hemelberg P.2)
Sweet smell of success (Claudia Beltran A bit short but good one! (Sam Thomas - Period 3) very good one (Nicole Hemelberg p.2) Great example, i've heard it before but until now never realized it was alliteration. (Felipe sanchez P-7)
Beard beacon brownies become bitter, Ramon. p 3 hahahahahaha nice one ramon! (Pablo Tello P.1) jajajaja funny one (miguel posse) Nice, but i dont think it makes sense... (Mateo Osorio P.7)
tongue twisters take time to terminate (Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) Haha good one and so true! (Sam Thomas - Period 3) funny example (daniel moreno p3)
Yodeling Yaks Yearned to Yap at Yorkshires (Sam Thomas - Period 3) I specially like letter y (daniel moreno p3) very creative example( Gregory Goldemberg P.3)
My mother moved my money to Mexico. (Mariajose Archila P7) Very creative but a little wierd (sofia aldana p.2) sounds like a mobster (daniel m p3) I like it a lot! it is very original! (Daniela Velez P.1) very unique and creative! great example!!(tatiana seinjet p.3) Made me laugh (Paula Jaramillo P.3) Very funny (mariana buraglia P.3) its good but sounds mysterious (Esteban Villegas p.7)
soccer super star samir plays for manchester city(miguel posse p3 ) I like it, but samir is not a superstar, silva is(lorenzo muñoz P7)
has he had hot dogs?? (daniel moreno p3) Yes i have. good one (Mateo Osorio P.7)
cats come cooking caramel cookies creatively. (Daniela Velez P.1) sweet ;) in like 3 ways (sophie stecker. p,7)
camilo cant draw cats (Camilo Cano p.2) Really. No I'm just teasing. They are actually very hard to draw. (Nicolas Triana p3)
My mother makes me mad ( Felipe Mayorga p2) Lol this is a really creative one ( Esteban Villegas p.7)
they twirl through the temple(tatiana seinjet p.3) i really like it good example (beatriz pena p.7) i like it, it has both T and TH (sophie stecker. p,7) Great, very creative (mariana buraglia P.3)
Maria made mexican tacos for mariana (mariana buraglia P.3)
Baby butterflies build beautiful buildings (beatriz pena p.7) Liked this one alot tuogh to understand but made me laugh good job. (Juliana LAborde p.3)
perry purred until peter picked perry up. (Rachel Coombs pd.7)
How much wood would a woodchuck chuck if a woodchuck could chuck wood? (Mateo Osorio P.7) very good example and hard tongue twister (gregory Goldemberg P.3 CLASSIC. tongue twister/ alliteration... amazing (sophie stecker. p,7)
Bobby blows big balloons (Nicole Hemelberg P.2) Nice! makes sense and rymthes I liked that you used all of the same letters. (Juliana LAborde p.3) This has a good rhyme and make sense (Estban Villegas p.7)
Many must measure megalithic megaliths many Mondays. Dan Sanclemente. P.-1. Dan, you and your comments always leave me impressed, good (lorenzo muñoz P7)
The lazy, lonely, loose lizard licked lemons (Felipe sanchez P-7) I liked this because it makes sense and it has humor also, it was interesting! (Juliana LAborde p.3)
Beware, big bears behind my bed. (Paula Jaramillo P.3) nice one i like it veyr original (daniela canas P-4)
Bob bought bread and ate it by the Byscaine Boulevard. (Nicolas Triana p3) i like it but you have a lot of words that dont start with the letter B (cristina uribe p.7)
laura likes lemon lollipops (daniela canas p.4) i love lemon pops! very original (cristina uribe p.7)
Tomas tried to take terry to the track.(Carlos Riascos p.8) good example, like how it makes sense (cristina uribe p.7) good example (mathias kling p.1)
Carlos can create cans Tomas urrutia p.1)
the shy, sad, sassy squirrel saw something scary. (cristina uribe p.7)
I like to lick ice. (mathias kling p.1)
The jell-o jiggled as it jogged (sophie Steckerl p.) Very original and creative sophie's so smart, and sarcastic since summer.< ec? :) (Juliana Laborde p.3)
MAria moans when mergio mamos moves (Juliana Laborde p.3)
Alices aunt ate apples and acorns around August (Esteban Villegas p.7)