Imagery

the good old days where the sun was up and the desert was hot. (joel rabinovich p.7) very nice, i pictured it tomas urrutia p.1) can imagine how hot it is (cristina u. p.7) Made a very clear image in my head! Nice description. (Paula Jaramillo P.3) Colombia: a country with beautiful nature, loud people and smelly food. (lorenzo muñoz P7) Good example, its quicl, clear and good as itself. (Felipe sanchez P-7) you can picture kind of how colombia is (cristina u. p.7) did you write that (mathias kling p.1) When I went to the pizza parlor its smelled like freshly baked pizza. ( Samuel Fajardo P-7) Great, totally made me 'smell' pizza. (camila toro p3) I can feel the smell and know were you are builds up the setting (Isabel botero P7) it is very good and creative i can perfectly feel it (karen levy P2) Amazing example of imagery, it gave a mental image (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3 ) I like your use with the vocabulary words.( jeff P.4) makes me want to eat pizza! (cristina uribe p.7) In CNG, the place outside of the teacher cafeteria, smells like a rotting corpse. (Mateo Galvis p3) very true, your description took me there tomas urrutia p.1). HAHAHAHAHA so true, I can smell it. (Samuel Fajardo P-7) Agree with Samuel. Hilarious! I can even smell it! GROSS!!!(Alma Peñate P7) (Very funny and very original Lorenzo Castellanos P.3)it does smell horrible... but its nothing compared with the students cafeteria (daniel m p3)That smell makes me sick.Good one ( felipe mayorga p2) Very good, good description. (Rachel Coombs pd.7) I like it, but its a little exagerated (lorenzo muñoz P7) The classroom with twinkling lights, calming atmosphere, colorful poofs, and happy chatter of students is F15, Hippie Paradise. (Ms.Shawn) I can clearly visualize the classroom, many good details (sofia escobar p4) I can relate to this (Lorenza Galvis ) Can imagine your self in the class room, creates an image on readers mind (Laura Becerra p.4) its a really good example it has lots of details people cna realy visualize the classroom ( mariana lozano p4) very good example I can picture it perfectly p.1)It is a good example because it makes you feel inside the classroom, eventhough you are not in their.(Ramon. P.3) Forms a great image of your wonderful room Ms Shawn, Great!! (camila toro p3) Nice description, I can see the picture clearly ( Daniela Cepeda P.7) (Short but descriptive and interesting Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) I LOOOOOOOOVE your class (daniel m p3) I like it because its true (lorenzo muñoz P7) You give all the details required, good example. (Felipe sanchez P-7) Great descriptive words, and details! Makes a perfect image in my head with only words! (Paula Jaramillo P.3) Times square with the big TV screens with propaganda, in NYC, lots of people,excited atmosphere. ( Bernie Szapiro p:2) nice job, very good example tomas urrutia p.1) very good details and adjectives, i really can imagine it (sofia escobar p4) I can visualize it perfectly (Lorenza Galvis) Nice! And true too. I can remember it just as what you said! (Alma Peñate P7)descriptive so you can see the image more clear (Laura Becerra p.4) good example(andres silva p.3)Oh New york! How i miss you so! (Armando G. Lugo Period 2) its a very good example ( Bernie Acevedo P.4) Really good example (Maria Villamizar p4) Perfect, you make feel like if i was there ( felipe mayorga p2) i can picture it perfectly good detais ( nicole hemelberg p.2) Very good example bernie (lorenzo muñoz P7) The soft, dark brownies that smelled like chocolate and tasted delicious. (Antonia Pulido period 3) very good details (Lorenza Galvis ) something that everyone likes so you can imagine yourself eating them. (Laura Becerra p.4) Could feel the brownies in my mouth(arturo sarmiento p2) you did great details that make me imagine it and really want a brownie. (gabriela montenegro p.4) I want brownies NOW! (Claudia Beltran p.8) Yum!!! It sounded delicious!!! want brownies!! (Daniela Pedraza P.1) This makes me hungry, good! ( Daniela Cepeda P. 7)exellent! it made me hungryyyyy! (laura michelsen p.1) __**I can taste the brownies already(Bernie Szapiro P:2) makes me hungry! i want brwonies good detalis ( Nicole Hemelberg P.2) Tasty example (lorenzo muñoz P7) Great description...make want brownie! (Paula jaramillo P.3)**__ __**went to a chocolate factory and i couldn't stop licking my lips (cristina uribe p.7)**__ The day smelt wonderful,like apple pies it was raining and I heard the rain fall, it was chilly but I didn't mind. (Lorenza Galvis )I could feel it in my senses.(Juan Felipe Zuletap2) I realy liked it could realy imagine it ( arturo sarmiento p2) i really like when you discribe the smell ( Bernie Acevedo P.4 ) I liked that you used more than one sense (Felipe Silva P.1) very descriptive and you can imagine it perfectly (Mariajose Archila p.7) good example it really shows imagery(andres silva p.3) __**very original and easy to understand(Bernie Szapiro P:2)**__ I love winter, the sparkling snowflakes, the white sky, the leafless trees, snow angels and snowball fights. Very good imagery I can close my eys and see it (Samuel Fajardo P-7).( Maria Villamizar p4) I made me think of christmas.(Juan Felipe Zuletap2) Makes christmas more jolly ( Camilo Cano p.2) it really makes me think of chrismas and I can acctualy imagine it (gabriela montenegro p.4) I can see the splendor, in your description! (Dan Sanclemente P.-1.) I a feel at christmas(Ramon p3) It reminded me of the december holidays! (Alejandro Samper P.3) very good one i can picture it in my head ( Nicole Hemelberg p.2) Descriptive and good example (lorenzo muñoz P7) Sometime my mom tell that my brother and I fight like cats and dogs (Nicole Hemelberg P.2) I can see the image in my head (sophie steckerl p7) The Ocean, dark blue, aquamarine, greenish, light blue, crystal clear, diverse varieties of fish and corals, a whole new world (Laura Becerra p.4) good one and very long one ( Bernie Acevedo P.4 ) Really good, makes me think of summer ( Maria villamizar p4 ) Excellent description (Claudia Beltran p.8) I love this description, especially all the colors listed. It really describes the diversity of the ocean (Tamlen Reynolds p.1) I can see it in my mind. Very good! (Rachel Coombs pd.7) I like the description.(Ramon P3) __**I already feel its the ocean and the beach (Bernie Szapiro P:2)**__ The sky is all blue at the top with moving white and gray clouds the air moving dust and leaves the light of the sun heating youre eyes( Arturo Sarmiento p2) I can see the sky and here the wind (Felipe Silva P.1) I liked that it is long and has a lot of descriptive adjectives (Alejandro Samper P.3) Long but descriptive ( Daniela Cepeda P. 7) (Wow! super descriptive) The waves roaring angrily into the beach ( Camilo Cano p.2) Down to the point. I can imagine it in my head (sophie steckerl p7) Its short but one of the best(arturo sarmiento p2) I like it. its a personification too. Nice job! (Alma Peñate P7) I can see the Waves but also hear them (Felipe Silva P.1) Made me see and hear the waves, impressive! (camila toro p3) doesnt involve all the senses (daniel moreno p3)

The blue, sunny sky, the cotton ball clouds, the sand as white as snow in the winter time, the water as a mirror to the sky, and as the sunset in the water, all colors burst out like a volcano. And that is just the beach in Puerto Rico! (Armando G. Lugo Period 2) I can see the images of what you wrote.(Juan Felipe Zuleta2) This makes me miss Colorado - so eloquent!! (Sam Thomas - Period 3) Very good description, very creative ( felipe mayorgap2) The birds are singing in the fres morning.(Juan Felipe Zuleta p2) makes me sing of child-hood movies ( Camilo Cano p.2) the perfect place, the smell, the beach...ohh how wonderful (camila villamil p1) The garden listening at the soft and chrunchy leaves and the cool chilli wind going trhough your face blowing your hair backwards and tasting the sweet taste of autunm and the yellow sunny afternoon (karen levy p.2) good one, and long one also (sofia escobar p4) I can really imagine it ( Maria Villamizar p4) very good description (mathias kling p.1) very good and descriptive. I liked it a lot (Alejandro Samper P.3) It was great! I created a great visualization! (Ana Maria Samper P.7) I got the image fast, great ( Daniela Cepeda p. 7) It was great!! You had a great description (Silvia Loboguerrero p.2) woow great full description (daniel m p3) The dark red cool santa fe shirt ( Bernie Acevedo P.4 ) its original but I cant really imagine it. (gabriela montenegro p.4 )it needs more detail. (Tamlen Reynolds p.1) The gigantic chocolate sunday with hot chocalate all over the delicious ice cream. (gabriela montenegro p.4) woo a really detailed example of imagery ( mariana lozano p4) I'm starting to feel hungry! Loved It!!! (Daniela Pedraza P.1) Very descriptive. I can see it in my mind! (Dan Sanclemente P.-1.) I can totally feel it in my mouth! (Ana Maria Samper P.7) I like how its not so long and you can get the visualization very easy! (Silvia Loboguerrero p.2) very good, but it could have improved by not saying chocolate so many times cause it didn't sound right. But it was still good! (Rachel Coombspd.7) I like your happy tone (jeff p.4) perfect! a lot of description but at the same time simple. (mariana buraglia) The moon reflected on the beutiful sea (Felipe Silva P.1) Good one but you should put a little more description. (Ana Maria Samper P.7) I think you should descibe the scene more. (Makenzie Knight P.7) agree more details would be good (Mariajose Archila p.7) It was cold the snow was all over the place even on the green trees and all the signs of slow down. ( Silvia Loboguerrero p.2) good one I can really picture it ( camilo cano p.2) He felt like the sun was waving at him.(carlos riascos p.8) More detail would be better (sophie steckerl p7) The dessert was dramatically and fantastically delicious with an unrealistic but delicious flavor (lorenzo sanchez p4) I want dessert! (Claudia Beltran p.8) I love this description! It really emphasizes the look of the dessert! (Dan Sanclemente P.-1.) You didnt really describe it, or make a picture in my mind. You used the word delicious too often, and only used words describing something good in general. Fantastically probably isnt a word. (Tamlen Reynolds p.1) The philadelphia sushi is so good that when I eat the rice and the salmon gives you the best flavor (Mark Szapirop4) woo a really good example of imagery ( mariana lozano p4) I can picture it (mathias kling p.1) very good job in vocabulary (lorenzo sanchez p4) Mysterious huge darkness (Claudia Beltran p.8) I can see the darkness and even feel the atmosphere. (Isabel Botero P7) hear those magic reindeer click ( mariana lozano p4) I don't get it! (Daniela Pedraza P.1) I don't understand this one? (Makenzie Knight P.7) The tall green tree, with giant, juicy apples! (Daniela Pedraza P.1) (A very well described apple tree. Antonia Pulido period 3) The slowest, black, small computers on earth located in thew EVL (mathias kling p.1) The big, smelly, disgusting dog walked by me in the park (Pablo Tello P.1) (EWW! That dog seems pretty gross. Antonia Pulido period 3) The mighty Chimera, had his fur swaying in the wind. His scales repelled the constant glistening of the light against it. And its fire-breathing goat, spat out flames that scorched the land a new tone of black. (Dan Sanclemente P.-1.) Plumed in simple brown and white feathers, the majestic bald eagle spreads its long wings and takes off, searching for prey with it's illuminous, golden eyes.(Tamlen Reynolds p.1) Very good because you have a lot of description (Samuel Fajardo P-7) This is a good example of imagery because you describe it very well. (Makenzie Knight P.7) (Very well described but like it is very long it can get people bored Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) Sitting at a chair, watching a blank paper not knowing what to put in a examn. (Ramon. P3)i can relate! simple and original i like it (laura michelsen p.1) The atmosphere in the cafe was antique with the lighted candles and the cinnamon smell. (Alejandro Samper P.3) I like the words you used and how you described the looks and scent (Jack Akerman, Period 3  the gigantic green christmas tree, decorated with colours of every colour, and the smell of oak going slowly up my nose. (sebastian onoro p.2) descriptive, can see it in my mind (Mariajose Archila p.7) Very good example that almost everyone has expirienced before. (Ashlyn P.7) very real (miguel s p1) Really tripy indeed (Santiago Cabrera p.8)   It smelled like wet soil and there was a fresh, cold breeze. (Ana Maria Samper P.7) you explain smell and feeling/temperature i can feel the atmosphere (Isabel Botero P7) I liked how you used the senses to create a feeling (Maria Pombo P3) I feel like i can smell thee soil! :D very good! (Rachel Coombs pd.7)  I could see how the endless, deep, dark blue ocean spread throughout the coast. The salty smell rising up my nose.(Alma Peñate P7) Your tone is to sad make it happy.( jeff p.4) The music coursed through us, shaking our bodies as if it came from with in. (Makenzie Knight P.7) Really good word usage (Jack Akerman, Period 3) good Example, It really makes you feel like you are listening to the music. (Ashlyn P.7) I could see the cheese melted over the piece of bread and covered with big chunks of mushroom (Mariajose Archila P.7) The description is really good, I can almost smell the pizza (Jack Akerman, Period 3) You describe the pizza really good and you can really see it.(MarinneP3) Makes me want to go eat pizza very creative! (sofia aldana p.2) very descriptive and very well done! (Daniela Velez P.1) I can almost smell touch, and taste the pizza. (Nicolas Triana p3) cool miguel s P1)   That wonderful chocolate ice cream melted inside my mouth with its cold and shivering taste, just wonderful. (camila toro p3) Good imagery because that imagery trully crave me. (Esteban R. P.2) ** I want ice cream now! Great example! (Maria Vernaza P1) that sound delicious (daniela canas p.4) **  the sun was reflected in the water causing hundreds of beautiful colors. (Isabel botero P7)  l looked up and stared at the sky, as I felt the cold rain dripping down my face, soaking me in seconds ( Daniela Cepeda P. 7 )i like it dani! its simple and very creative (laura michelsen p.1)Very creative and you can relate to it very easily (MarianneP3) love it! a lot of description. (mariana buraglia) The puppy had soft smooth, brown shiny fur.(Laura Michelsen p.1) really good example!! i know you love dogs!! (tatiana seinjet p.3) Good imagery and really descriptive. (Esteban R. P.2) cute! (sofia aldana p.2) Like it! it is very original (Daniela Velez P.1) Great example I can almost feel the fur of the puppy (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3)-It's a beagle right? very good describing the texture. (mariana buraglia) **He had a silly appearance, a screechy voice, and a fishy smell** (Jack Akerman, Period 3) good example jack(andres silva p.3) Good example that has elements for sound, appearance, and smell. (Ashlyn P.7) I Can see that kind of person jack (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3) ** very simple but clear example! (Maria Vernaza P1) very clear and easy to imagine (Gregory Goldemberg P.3) The visualizing is easy and clear because of the fact that its a person, good job (Felipe Sanchez P-7) ** I felt the grass vvery smooth through my toes wile running throught the prairy(andres silvap.3) I liked how you described the situation.(Esteban R. P.2) nice, but I don't thino grass is very smooth... (Mateo Osorio p7) When I went to the beach the water was calm, The air was cool, and the air smelt like salt. (Ashlyn P Very good and creative example (MarianneP3) I experienced that just yesterday actually (Pablo Tello P.1) Your example of imagery gives me the feeling I'm in the beach. (Maria Pombo P3)  The soccer ball i kicked was soft but it was hard when kicked it and felt it. (Esteban R. P.2) it does not make sense (sofia aldana p.2) I don't get it (Daniela Velez P.1) didn't make any sense to me(sebastian fernandez p3) not very clear (gregory Goldemberg P.3)   The candy in my mouth felt like there was a party of sweetness in my mouth (Carlos Olarte P.8) yeaahh, everybody has felt that (Pablo Tello P.1) like your example (sebastian fernandez p3)   When I saw him the sun was shining, there was a blue sky and the air smelled like fresh flowers(MarianneP3) Nice example!! (Pablo Tello P.1) I like your idea! nice one (Silvia Loboguerrero p.2)   Along the smooth paved bike path, the colorful nature scene flew by and fresh, sweet air blew in my face as the trees rustled softly in the summer breeze. (Sam Thomas - Period 3) very good example.. a little bit long but very creative (karen levy P2) i like your creativity good job!! (beatriz pena p.7) When I entered the pool, I felt my skin getting cold, sunk my head and heard the bubbles going up while I saw them with a blurry vision (Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) great example! i can really feel it (karen levy P2) I can easily feel it because your description is really good. (Maria Pombo P3) lights went on and was reflected on her sparkly dress like a million mirrors (sofia aldana p.2) i can see that the dress was really pretty and full of sparkles! good example(tatiana seinjet p.3) at sight it was bright, you could hear the fire crack as the smell of smoke fills your lungs and the taste of ashes settles over your mouth, it felt hot in your hands. (daniel m p3) The color of the tasty and delicious doritos( felipe mayorga p2) thats a good one (miguel posse p2) When i am starving and i smell food i can't stoop imagining my favorite, but my stomach hurts (Daniela Velez P.1) **haha so true! great example! (Maria Vernaza P1) very true!! maybe you need more description(tatiana seinjet p.3) that is so true! good job (beatriz pena p.7) ** I could feel the crunchy crust, taste the sweet and warm apples, and smell the perfection in the apple pie. (Maria Pombo P3) good one very descrpitive (miguel posse p2) very descriptive(sebastian fernandez p3) i loved it very good (daniela canas p.4) that moment when you are in a hill or a mountain and then you run down and you fall (miguel posse p2 )

as soon as i opened the door the sweet aroma filled my lungs, when i took a bite it feel like i was bitting into a soft, fluffy cloud!! (mariana buraglia P.3)

When I went to the Funny brownies shop its smelled like hot chocolate funny brownies (Pedro Juan Mesa P.jajaja pedrojuan good one (miguel posse p2) extremely original and easy to imagine the funny brownies (gregory goldemberg P.3) Makes me want to go to the kitchen and have one very hot with vanilla ice cream. (Nicolas Triana p3)  **The beach was full and loud today and as I ate my freezing popsicle, my feet got burned by the sand so I ran to the sea and I could smell the saltwater of the sea. (Maria Vernaza P1) good example (mathias kling p.1)** as the chocolate ram down the fountain i but my red strawberry in it, i took a bite as the chocolate dripped down.(tatiana seinjet p.3) wow, very creative (Mateo Osorio p7) The wind calmy blew, and I could smell pine in the breeze. It was a perfectly warm day, and all the flowers had bloomed, creating a rainbow on the ground. (Rachel Coombs pd.7) its a clear example, good one (beatriz pena p.7) when i entered the bakery i smelled the freshly baked and tasty bread (beatriz pena p.7) yummy...i can actually smell it (daniela canas p.4) The soft crunchy pizza that smelled of cheese and pepperoni(sebastian fernandez p3) very clear example (Mateo Osorio p7) I'm hungry. I can almost feel the flavour in my mouth. (Nicolas Triana p3) hmmmm... sound like good pizza (mathias kling p.1) awesome (miguel samper p1) sounds really good (Esteban villegas p.7) The new ipad had the sparkle of a clear diamond (Gregory Goldemberg P.3) its pretty simple, but its understandable (Felipe Sanchez P-7) ipad... awesome (mathias kling p.1) The book had that old musty smell (Mateo Osorio p.7) good job in creativity but it is a little short (lorenzo sanchez p4) When walking down the street in Paris, the smell of fresh and crunchy bread, the delicious parfums de Coco, and a tasty raspberry macaron odour feel the air. (Nicolas Triana p3) very nice job creative and complete (lorenzo sanchez p4) ooo paris! fun and gets a really nice picture in my mind good job! (juliana Laborde p.3) the dark blue, peaceful ocean, accompained by an orange sunset and beautiful mountains, made the place perfect for inspiration. (Felipe sanchez P-7) I can imagine it already (Esteban Villegas p.7) when he played the guitar it was precise and every time he touch the cords you could feel it in every where (daniela canas p.4) I think i did this one already, so i guess i will put it again. The shoe seemed sexy, as the shoe ran acroos the hallway like a banana peel...(Santiago Cabrera p.8) The ocean breeze went through my nose as I thought, vacation is great (miguel samper p1) I want more vacation..goood one! creative (Juliana Labrde p.3) The rhyme-less, and annoying sound of the engine started to ruin parts of my brain and physiological thinking (Daniel Jursich p4) He's eyes the color o green emeralds, and his hair yellow gold, and soft just iike silk made hm perfect! (Paula jaramillo P.3) the room was dark, warm and extremely humid tomas urrutia p.1) The sea as pure as a babys heart (mathias kling p.1) nice clear example(carlos riascos p.8) good example (Esteban Villegas p.7)  The chocolate truffles were creamy and melted in your mouth (sophie steck p7) i want truffles I'll stop by your house later (Juliana Laborde p.3)  The rain fell to the ground, tears of hatred from the angry gray skies above (Juliana Laborde p.3)  The cheese was oozing out of the gaps in the crust through the pizza while the smell wafted into your nose (Esteban Villegas p.7)