Rhyme

he took my book from the hook of the crook (joel rabinovich p.8) it does ryhme but what is a crook? (cristina uribe p.7) good one (carlos riascos p.8) In the hall, he took a fall, chasing the ball (Ms. Shawn) "all: is th ryhme of each last word. (sofia escobar p4) Ms. Shawn I liked it a lot good rhy,ming method( pablo ancizar pp.8) Its a very good example and explains it (Lorenza Galvis p1) I can picture that actually happening (mathias Kling p.1) I think this a good example, I can notice you invented it from scratch. (camila toro p3) Good example, created from 0s (Jack Akerman, Period 3) Great exampple Ms. Shawn you made it from scratch (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3) Eventually I saw one day a boy running for the ball in the hallway and he trip and fell. Good one Ms. Shawn. (Nicolas Triana p3)   I look at my cook, book (Bernie Szapiro p:2) i dont think this is a good one (sofia escobar p4) this is not a god example ( Daniela Cepeda p.7) it dosent really rhyme is just a sentence (Laura Becerra p.4) I think you need more words that rhyme ( Lorenza Galvis p1) Need to more words ( Nicole Hemelberg p.2) good rhyme but need more words ( Pablo Corredor P4) I think that you shoul make the idea longer with more words so it is a better example (miguel samper P1 ) You should make it longer it is not a really good example (mathias kilng p.1) i like it because it is simple and makes sense i don't think the lenght maters so much. it does rhyme. (isabel botero P7) (Short but rhymes well :D! Antonia Pulido period 3) short but it actually rhymes and thats what we are loking for (lorenzo muñoz P7) I feel like eating a meal (lorenzo muñoz P7) great example, makes sense and ryhmes (cristina u. p.7) too cool for school (cristina uribe p.7) As he fell i could feel the smell of the old dirty shell (karen levy P2) it dosnt really rhyme (camilo cano p.2) Kind of confusing but goiod (lorenzo muñoz P7) The cat sat on the mat and ate a rat. (antonta pulido period 3) al the rhymes are with the words that finish in at (Laura Becerra p.4) very good and easy example (This is an example that is very commonly used, not bad... Nicolás Cruz P.1.) funny and a great example, very clear (cristina u. p.7) This is not original, its from the book the cat in the hat ( Daniela Cepeda p.7) ( Lorenza Galvis p1) very good one ( Nicole Hemelberg p.2) Exellent rhyme ( Felipe Mayorga p2 )Rhyming word is at( Pablo Corredor P4) good because it makes sense and uses good ryhme. (rachel coombs pd.7) at at at (Mariajose Archila P7) Not original but still rhymes so good (lorenzo muñoz P7) I was blind, I lost my mind so my eyes were realigned. ( gabriela montenegro p.4) Good one Ramon p 3 nice rhyme and well thought(felipe mayorga p2) nice one really original (camilo cano p.2) I would like to go to the moon in a baloon like in a Cartoon. ( Maria Villamizar p4) great selection of rhyme scheme (Laura Becerra p.4) very creative ( Nicole Hemelberg) Very good rhyme ( Felipe Mayorga p2 ) (The rhyme is funny so you get more interested (Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) it had a good rhyme (Esteban villegas P.7) Very creative, I liked it. (Paula Jaramillo P.3) I want to go to the moon with a spoon and dig a racoon (laura becerra p.4) very good like the words you used ( Lorenza Galvis p1) all words finish in oon good one ( Nicole Hemelberg p.2) like that you used raccon becuase you cant ryhme that with everything... like it (mariana romero p 4 ) It does not make sense ( mathias kling p.1)(the words do ryhme but the sentence doesn't make any sense Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) I like it. Ramon p 3 I was wishing for a lime then I found a dime at the right time and bought a lime ( Lorenza Galvis p1) Very good Rhyme, I like the rythm (Bernie Acevedo P.4)ORIGINAL (SOPHIE STECK) this is very good, I like the used worlds( Daniela Cepeda p.7)(It is a good rhyme but it would be better if you didn't repeat words in a rhyme as short as this one Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) I want to have a ball, So i pass through the hall, And have a stall. ( Juan Felipe Cleves) P. 2** __not very original (bernie szapiro p:2)__ ** your idea is not very clear but does rhyme (Claudia Beltran p.8) Why does everybody use the word ball in their rhymes(andres silva p.3) I went to the mall, to buy a ball, for my pal (Nicole Hemelberg p.2) __**very good one very easy to understand (bernie szapiro P:2)**__ Great idea good example very original (William Bergman p1) Original and great Nicole, you invented it right? (Camila Toro p3) (Mall and ball rhyme except for pal, but other than that its good :). Antonia Pulido period 3) very good and funny but pal doesnt rhyme with the others (tomas urrutia p.1) I would like a nickel to buy me a pickel ( Camilo Cano p.2) __**you may need more words that rhyme (bernie szapiro P:2)**__ I really liked it! (Claudia Beltran p.8) i like it but you should put more words that rhyme He looks like a duck who's stuck in a truck (also imagery) (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3) nice!!! creative... (tomas urrutia p1) (Mariajose Archila P7) i think is a very good one camilo (miguel posse p2) creative (lorenzo sanchez p4) Im in a plain around rain going to Spain ( arturo Sarmiento p2) Very good, i would like to see some more words ( Bernie Acevedo P.4 )good rhyme but it would better to have more rhyming words (Pablo Corredor P4) I promise, I like every one of these comments. Whenm thay say positive things on it! (Santiago Cabrera p.8) very good example(andres silva p.3) good example but I thought you hated spain (miguel posse p2) Oh no i saw a crow, with a bow, and broke it's toe (Armando G. Lugo Period 2) (I like the ryme becau se gives a image of how that would be in real life juan manuel triana p8) Good 9 Antonio CL P.8) Good one it was a good example.(Alejandra Urdaneta p.8) I love your rhyme! And crows! (dan Sanclemente P.-1.) Im like a dog and look like a pug ( Felipe Mayorga p2 )(jajaajja i like laura mejia p4) jajaj really good one it makes so much sense ( Mariana Romero p 4 ) Not exactly a rhyme... (Sam Thomas - Period 3)(don't see the ryhming and it is too short Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) hoop loop.(Juan Felipe Zuleta p2) I think is a little to short (Bernie Acevedo P.4 ) (I think is very good your ryme because it relatyes very well to your life. juan manuel triana p8) Good 9 Antonio CL P.8) Good one, but very short. (Paula Jaramillo P.3) A little short but very good (tomas urrutia p.1) bernie and ernie went early to see an attorney ( Bernie Acevedo P.4) thats it is a origianal and creative example ( mariana lozano p4 ) Oh what a great example ! (miguel samper P 1) (It is very rhymy! It just caught my attention. Nicolás Cruz P.1.) very good example(andres silva p.3)Nice, rhyme! I love on how you joined the words in a rhyme! (Dan Sanclemente P.-1.) (Hahahah! Bernie and Ernie. Funny names that both rhyme. Antonia Pulido period 3) attorneys and patrony and patony and ratony (Pablo Corredor P.4) Good ( Antonio CL P.8) (very intelligent and it had 3 rhyming words (Lorenzo Catsellanos P.3) my mom is king of fun, she always paints and it also rains (sofia escobar p4) thatas a good example of rythme ( mariana lozano p4) This little duck, cost me a buck. (lorenzo sanchez p4) (I likeed how you rhyme, it was very creative (Roberto Guerrero p4) (I like the ryme because it reminds me about some ducks that I'de had. juan manuel triana p8) I8 like it good one(Alejandra Urdaneta p.8) (very nice and creative it mixes two different things Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) creative, it's good! i like the rhyme and it's original. REMINDS ME OF BEING A LITTLE KID (SOPHIE STECK) my sister isabel has a brand new bell that sounds like a duck evrey time you talk (laura mejia p4) like the combination of the words (mariana romero p 4 ) I Like how you used real life with your poem- (Juliana Laborde P3) you can have so bierber fever from justin bieber the super heroe (mariana romero p 4 ) its a pretyy god example it like it and it is very creative 9 (mariana lozano p4) good I liked howyou intertwined your words-(Juliana Laborde period3) he shot one gun but the damage, was none..... (Roberto Guerrero) Nice one (Claudia Beltran p.8) Very creative (Ana Maria Samper P.7) The rhyme is very clear but he sure cant aim (Felipe Silva P.1) Great example Roberto, real creative and made from scratch (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3) He saw the cat in the hat with a friend that was very fat. (juan manuel triana p8) haha there were a few rhymes in that sentence, and it's funny. (rachel coombs pd.7) Spooky halloween cookie (Claudia Beltran p.8) (So... where is the rhyme here? I got lost. Nicolás Cruz P.1.) Ex. Math look in my science book (Antonio CL P.8) good rhyme! ( Carlos Olarte p.8) It is sort of like, sticks and stones may break my bones, but your words will not hurt me! (Dan Sanclemente P.-1.) I went to the sun to have fun ( Carlos Olarte p.8) I like it and it rymths good.( Alejandra Urdaneta p.8) ** great example! (maria vernaza p1) ** i like it. (Rachel Coombs pd.7) it is a good rhyme and makes sense, I can relate. (Isabel botero P7) Sticks are down hit the floor, get the hammer fix the door! this is like jershy Shore, somebody needs math more! (Santiago Cabrera p.8) Very creative, good rhyme (Miguel Samper P1)Very original! (Ana Maria Samper P.7) I wanted a nickel but instead, I got a pickel ( Carlos Olarte p.8) **it is very original! and it rhymes very well (maria vernaza p1)** nice, and simple (Esteban Villegas P.7) Great job, Carlitos! I like it very much! (Alma Peñate P7) nice carlitos creative (lorenzo sanchez p4) My doll had a call from my dog.( Alejandra Urdaneta p.8) Very original. (Ana Maria Samper P.7) I found a mouse in his house(Steve Jaramillo .8) A little weak, but good. (Camila Toro p3) **You always see rhymes with mouse and house (Alejandro Samper P3)** a i was in hall and i pass the ball ( mariana lozano p4) I took i hike along with Mike (Pablo Tello P.1) Good example get the idea ( William Bergman p1) I like it creative-Juliana Laborde p3) I like it because it is very easy to understand (Alejandro Samper P3) I was drinking coke and made a joke (Migue Samper P 1) (Wow I am impressed by the originality of this comment. Nicolás Cruz P.1.) Good creative example (Alejandro Samper P3) creative...i like it (beatriz pena p.7) I know a bow for every dough. (Nicolás Cruz P.1.) Great example understand the idea ( William Bergman p1) Apples word is so absurd, its autocorrect stresses me like heck. (mathias kling p.1) lol, very funny and real mathi, good job (daniel m p3) I took the book from the cook ( William Bergman p1) ** very good example! (maria vernaza p1) ** ver simple but good (Esteban villegas P.7) Even though the bear, slunk back in his cave, a horrid image, he came to engrave! (Dan Sanclemente P.-1.) **i like Mike who rides a bike (maria vernaza p1)** simple and short and creative i like it (laura michelsen period 1) As Laura said, its short and very creative! Its very catchy too! (Alma Peñate P7) Jumpy rhythm, simple (Jack Akerman, Period 3) nice rhyme(sebastian fernandez p3) I am in a plane going to Maine with a huge pain (Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) nice example (camilo cano p.2) This easy bizzy lemon squizzy. (Camila Toro P3) CUTE REMINDS ME OF K.4 (SOPHIE STECKERL) Like it a lot! (Daniela Velez P.1) Maybe someday everything will be okay and everyone will shout hooray! (Juliana Laborde p3) Very original, Juli! love it!(Alma Peñate P7) I think I'd like some apple pie while I sit and lie. (Ana Maria Samper P.7) its creative though you could add more rhyme. (gabriela montenegro p.4) The girl licked the popsicle stick and then kicked it to the ground, thanks to a tick The cat sat on the mat (sophie steckerl p.7) nice job mabey next time just add a little bit more rhyme. (sebastian onoro p.2)nice one although not very original (laura michelsen period 1) When I skipped towards them, I almost tripped so I decided to walk instead. (Alma Peñate P7)

The frog jumped over the dog. (Rachel Coombs pd.7) good rhyme, it makes sense without living out the rhyme (Isabel botero P79i like it although it doesnt ryme much (laura michelsen period 1) Good Rhyme that does not over do it (Ashlyn P.7) i like it very simeple.. but good (beatriz pena p.7) "I do not like green eggs and ham, I do not like them Sam I Am"-Dr. Seuss (Alejandro Samper P3) good example(sebastian fernandez p3) Nice! (Paula Jaramillo P.3)

if you go to jail you wont get bailed and if you go outside you might get hit with hail, what a fail. (sebastian onoro p.2) jajaja very long and creative (Felipe Silva P.1) Simply is an exellent rhyme!! (Esteban R. P.2) Nice rhyme! real interesting (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3) she banged the ball, into the wall, of the tall hall. (Isabel botero P7) it makes me understand really fast and easy what a rhyme is. (gabriela montenegro p.4) good rhyme (Jack Akerman, Period 3) You did a good job making a good rhyme with a lot of words (Ashlyn P.7) it will make your thoughts fly into the sky ( Daniela Cepeda p.7) very good rhyme and clear (Felipe Silva P.1) clear and good rhyme(tatiana seinjet p.3) i'm ignorind his snoring (Felipe Silva P.1) Good Rhyme (Esteban R. P.2) very good (lorenzo sanchez p4) take that broom to your room (laura michelsen p.1) Like how original it is (Candelaria P.1) Really Creative!! (Esteban R. P.2) **I'll draw your charts, if you pay me 100 pop tarts** (Jack Akerman, Period 3) If you pay me that I´ll definitely do it (Candelaria P.1) Good one, Ilobee pop tarts. Ramon p.3 Forest gump loved to jump(andres silva p.3) very funny and easy to notice love it (Candelaria P.1) Forrest Gump loved tu RUN (Alejandro Samper P3) easy to see the rhyme (Mariajose Archila P7)innacurate, lol (daniel m p3) good one (miguel posse p2 )

Dont you know I cant row? (Candelaria P.1) I like how it is a simple rhyme that works (Ashlyn P.7) easy and simple :D (daniel m p3) Short but concrete (Maria Pombo P3) Understandable, and original. (Felipe sanchez P-7) I dont know how to rhyme, but is that a crime? (Ashlyn P.7) it isn't when you accidently do so (Pablo Tello P.1) Love it! And you have a point... (Sam Thomas - Period 3) thats really creative i like it (gabriela montenegro p.4 ) Really original! I like the humor in it. (Maria Pombo P3) i like it.... very original and simple (beatriz pena p.7)

I have no idea of a rhyme! (Esteban R. P.2) seriously??? :/ (Pablo Tello P.1) you should figure something out fast! :S (sofia Seriously???? :O It is very easy just sit down concentrate and you will get one. (Nicolas Triana p3) Nick nack patty wack.(Samuel Fajardo P-7) funny (Pablo Tello P.1) very cool! and creative (karen levy P2) nice! (sofia aldana p.2) good one samy (miguel posse p2) I have One Direction infection, I show mi affection by election and have a collection of them. I think I need an injection to cure myself. (Mariajose Archila P7) I hope it works :P great rhyme! (Sam Thomas - Period 3) great one! very creative (karen levy P2) i absolutely love it!! very unique and creative!!! (tatiana seinjet p.3) i love it! feel the same way! jajajaja (Daniela Velez P.1) totaly like (daniela canas p.4)  One summer out on Silver Hill, three men were working at a mill; one was named Frank and two named Bill, and they filled up the mill which is on the hill still. (Sam Thomas - Period 3) kind of long but it rhymes anyways it is sooo good! (karen levy P2) I agree a little long but very creative! (sofia aldana p.2) very creative and good rhyme (gregroy goldemberg P.3) Wow Sam you should write poems more often. Looking at all the examples you have done so far I like them a lot and they make a lot of sense. (Nicolas Triana p3) I ate eight plates of candy clay (Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) very cool one great! (karen levy P2) zayn is vain (sofia aldana p.2) Don t get it Ramon. I ate 100 pies and I almost die. Ramon p 3 it doesnt make any sense(tatiana seinjet p.3)goood one ramon very original (miguel posse p2) high in the sky, where the angels fly (daniel moreno p3) Very poetic and original; I like it! (Maria Pombo P3) very poetic(sebastian fernandez p3) in Greece there is peace.(tatiana seinjet p.3) simple but nice! (Daniela Velez) Like it! (Paula Jaramillo P.3) A description of a place in rhyme, I didn't see that one coming, nice one (Felipe Sanchez P-7) Bieber Fever will never beat Direction Infection (Daniela Velez P.1) Perfect! (mariana buraglia P.3) You stole my soul. (Maria Pombo P3) :(......like (daniela canas p.4) Great one! (mariana buraglia P.3) Thierry henry the king of highburry is back (miguel posse p2) the milk is like silk (beatriz pena p.7) Great! easy to understand (mariana buraglia P.3) the cat was in the hat, when theboy sat on top of the hat. (mariana buraglia P.3) the ball was near a fall(sebastian fernandez p3) The hare was rare. (Paula Jaramillo P.3) kind of short but good(gregory goldemberg P.3) original i like it even though its short (daniela canas p.4) He is there. But where? I can't see his hair, Are you blind? Why can't you find? Do you need rewind or rest from this eye test? (Nicolas Triana p3)really original and good (gregory Goldemberg p.3) that female beaver had a wooden mcleaver and she happened to look like justin bieber(gregory goldemberg) That is pretty funny and original (Felipe Sanchez P-7) Funny and creative mean though! Really creative! (juliana laborde p3)

a mistake make you the person who you are to become (daniela canas p.4)very original (mathias kling p1) is this rhyme? (Mateo Osorio p7)

i took my book and sat on a stool to trim some wool (tomas urrutia p.1a) good example (mathias kling p.1) I told my friend Mel that it smelled like gel on the well (Felipe sanchez P-7) very creative (mathias kling p.1)

the crook stole my nook that acted as my book (mathias kling p.1) good one!(Mateo Osorio p7)A great example Juan Felipe Zuleta p2) great creative (juliana laborde p3)

knock the rook from the truck (carlos riascos p.8) I'm not sure this rhymes... (Mateo Osorio p7)very original(Juan Felipe Zuleta p2)

i don't like green eggs and ham, Sam I am! (Mateo Osorio p7) not originL(Juan Felipe Zuletap2) like this is one of my facvorite books..love dr suess! (juliana laborde p3)

this is a race grace.(Juan Felipe Zuletap2)

loop and hoop(Juan Felipe Zuletap2) Gold and sold(Juan Felipe Zuletap2) Smart? oh you can measure it on a chart. Or maybe if you could outsmart mozart.