Assonance

try to light the fire ( joel rabinovich p.8) very original but a little short (lorenzo sanchez p4) short but at the same time easy to understand (sophie steckerl p.7) He saw a ball far away and walked along the wall awhile to find it. (Ms. Shawn) I like the idea, i really understand it (sofia escobar p4) good example ms shawn(andres silva p.3)Easy to notice what figurative language you are using, letter A (Laura Becerra p.4)its really easy to understand with this example its very good.(gabriela montenegro p.4) I really understand the example perfectly (lorenza galvis p1) I liked that the example was long and it showed perfectly how assonance are used (Alejandro Samper P.3) Great example, the repetition of vowels is completely clear. (camila toro p3) You can see the repetition of vowels very easily, it is a great example! (Daniela Velez P.1) Good example, you make it long and consistent (Felipe sanchez P-7) Good one! You could understand the repetition of the A very clearly all the way through. (Paula Jaramillo P.3) How do you do? (Bernie Szapiro p:2) very simple, should improve (sofia escobar p4) I've heard it before. My English friends greet me like that!!! (Alma Peñate P7)Small and gets to the point. Although you should make it longer :/ (Armando G. Lugo Period 2) Short yet shows the O of assonance (Laura Becerra p.4) Very short( Arturo sarmiento p2) Too short... more creativity but good assonance (valentina p8) very short but very good (lorenza galvis p1) A great example on assonances in everyday life.(Alejandro Samper P.3) I like it alot even though it is simple. I think the words are chosen wisely since they are not a rhyme but a goos assonance (Isabel Botero P7) Thought out, but should improve making it a bit longer. (camila toro p3)The tone made me feel sad(p.4 jeff) Amantha´s amigas ate apples around April (lorenzo muñoz P7) id say its good (joel rabinovich p.8) I can hear the wedding bells (nicole hemelberg p.2) Hard to detect, but good one (lorenzo muñoz P7) Ha Ha Ha, that doll did fall and scraped the wall all over my room (Armando G. Lugo Period 2) Dosent focus on a single letter for assonance, so you cant know so much if its assonace (Laura Becerra p.4) there is many vowels but the assonance is for a (natalia martinez p.2)there are some parts that have assonance and some that dont ( arturo sarmiento p2) i think it isnt so easy to see the assonance you could do better(gabriela montenegro p.4) Liked your example really good (Pablo Ancizar p 8) **__very good and original (Bernie Szapiro P:2) I liked your orgrazine(jeff P.4)__** dont mke ny sence i not an assonnce ( nicole hemelberg p.2) Bees feel street feet.(gabriela montenegro p.4) Good example, you can find it very easily sophie steckerl p.7 nice example really cool(felipe angarita p.4)cool selection (gabriel posada p4) Good( Antonio Calderón Lozano P.8) there are many asonantes in the sentence.( Samuel fajardo P-7) hahaha very funny! (Ana Maria Samper P.7) Creative and very easy to understand ( felipe mayorga p2 ) I need sunscreen for te beach and some peach to eat. (Antonia Pulido period 3) ORINAL! Really likes the way you used assonance,; you can get the feel of the beach (sophie steckerl p.7) like how you make it rhyme very original(nicole hemelberg p.2) i like how it also rhymes. (natalia martinez p.2) Awesome example Antonia, nice job! (camila toro p3) **I really liked this one! (Alma Peñate P7) __very good and creative nice tone ( bernie szapiro P:2)__ ** Oh look to the sock with the giant lock with a rock on a mop ( Laura Becerra p.4) I did not undertand it ( Camilo Cano p.2) i odnt understand it, dont get it. (sofia escobar p4)dont understand. but its good. (Alejandra Urdaneta p.8) Didn't get it either but it is a very good example (Claudia Beltran p.8) **__weird but good example (bernie Szapiro P:2) it does rhyme, however the sentence is meaningless. (daniel m p3) I like a lot this example! (Daniela Velez P.1)__** very good example and creative (nicole hemelberg p.2) I can see the sea with a green boat in and people drinking tea (Lorenza Galvis p1) this is a very good non rhyming asonsnce (natalia martinez p.2) (Great example. I like how you used both "see" and "sea". Antonia Pulido period 3) very original(andres silva p.3) very creative! i like how it doesn't rhyme but you still know what the assonance is (sofia aldana p2)The tone is happy and joyful.(Jeff p.4) It is a very good example very simple and short. Good. (Nicolas Triana p3) I stress when confess i did a mess on my dress. ( Maria Villamizar p4) very creative :) (karen levy p2) One of the best ( Camilo Cano p.2) Good ( Antonio Calderón Lozano P.8) Very creative and it did rhyme and all(Pablo Ancizar p.8) Creative! its awesome how it rhymes (valentina p8) I like that its really original (Candelaria P.1) Wow! Its really creative! (Ana Maria Samper P.7) I don't understand it but it seems creative (sofia aldana p.2) very good one i like this example (nicole Hemelberg p.2)  Its a day in May and theres rain (arturo sarmiento P2) I like the way it rhymes! ( Silvia Loboguerrero p.2)cool choice ( gabriel posada p4) Creative, and unique. (Paula Jaramillo P.3)   Three trees had bees and peas (sofia aldana p.2) it also rhymes (natalia martinez p.2)Like the way the repetition of the E make it rhyme(arturo sarmiento p2) i love it its realy easy to see the assonance. (gabriela montenegro p.4) nice! (gabriel posad ap4) Good( Antonio Calderón Lozano P.8) This example is very good, its well thought ( felipe mayorga p2) the men's den was full of hen (daniel m p3) very creative but a luittle short he is really fit for this trip (cristina uribe p.7) afraidnes awares alexandra of the darkness (natalia martinez p.2) I really like it! It is very original and I like thw rhyme (Silvia Loboguerrero p.2) Love how it sounds (Claudia Beltran p.8) I like how it rhymes a bit ( Lorenza Galvis p1) this is good, i think it's a good example (Rachel Coombs pd.7) Great example (miguel samper p1) My dog ate a bug and dug fore more (camila villamil p1) My cat sat in the matt while he ate a rat. ( Silvia Loboguerrero p.2) I liked it! I had never heard it, good one ( Camilo Cano p.2) That's a good one, though it does appear in the book " the Cat in the Hat". ( Daniela Cepeda P. 7) good example(andres silva p.3) well done, Ramon p 3 good and it rhymes so double good (lorenzo muñoz P7) Maps dont collapse and you can sing them in raps while eating wraps (karen levy p.2) I like your idea! I can see the assonance! very well done ( Silvia Loboguerrero p.2) The green tree had a bee hive.(lorenzo Sanchez p:4) its really good and original.(gabriela montenegro p.4) very original (bernie acevedo p.4) ( i can see the assonance (mathias kling p.1) I liked that the assonance had a relation to nature. (Alejandro Samper P.3) Simple and easy to understand( felipe mayorga p2) i don't think this is considered assonance (Rachel Coombs pd.7) the cat ate the hat with an ant (felipe angarita p.4) (nice example, very original (bernie acevedo p.4) very original ( Lorenza Galvis p1) very well done ( mathias kling p.1)I really like it simple and easy tpo understand (Laura miclesen p.1) a bug a pug and an ugly duck(gabriel posada p4) good example (bernie acevedo p.4) a very good example ( mariana lozano p4) great example, (i like that you used I like the way you mensioned many animals in your example juan manuel triana p8) creativity! (valentina p8) good one and very creative. (Alejandra Urdaneta p.8) This is very creative and the vowels are very clear (Ashlyn P.7) Very original but I'm not sure hat rhymes with ant. (Ana Maria Samper P.7) the black ball was blocked by bob ( bernie acevedo p.4) a very creative example ( mariana lozano p4)I liked that example ramon. My dad had a cat and a hat (Mark Szapiro p4) very creative and original example ( mariana lozano p4) Very good example mark, good vowel repetition of the A(Pablo Ancizar P.8) I had seen half of the sentence already but its good. (Alejandra Urdaneta p.8) Even though it has a rhyme the A's are used really well to make an assonance. I like it! (Isabel Botero P7) (Good example but not very original "the cat in the hat". Most of it rhymed too which is cool! Antonia Pulido period 3) Ex. Math is a awsome answer to science. ( Antonio Calderón Lozano P. 8) (I dont understand. juan manuel triana p8) Fleet feet sweep by sleeping geese(Pablo Ancizar P.8) good one! (valentina p8) (Good ryme and example i like it juan manuel triana p8) (Every word you used had the "ee" sound except for "by" which is pretty good! Fleet and feet both rhyme :). Antonia Pulido period 3) he sees feet besides trees (Valentina p8) creative Alejandra Urdaneta p.8) Nice repetition of the e (: (Claudia Beltran p.8) The e.. is easily spoded ( Daniela Cepeda P. 7) An alligator is an awsome animal. (Alejandra Urdaneta p.8)I like it it is very creative and easy to understand(lauramichelsen p.1) The repeating vowels are very clear, and it is creative (Ashlyn P.7) An anaconda is an awesome reptile (Simon Zapata P8 ) I don't get what is the vowel that repeats here (Jack Akerman, Period 3) Me niether. Ramon p 3  their was a cool pool in liverpool. (juan manuel triana p8) Good example, clear and funny (Tomas Urrutia P!) Nice use of the words (Daniel Jursich P.4)  Im with chester in manchester ( Carlos Olarte p.8) Like your idea, it made me laugh very easy to understqand (Daniela Pedraza P.1) I don't see the vowels easily... but creative exaomple ( Daniela Cepeda P. 7) Im eating peas in chelsea ( Carlos Olarte p.8) very creative ( mathias kilng p.1)I didnt really understand it but it seems very creative(laura michelsen p.1) one opportunity ( mariana lozano p4) Like your creativity good example very easy to understand (Daniela Pedraza P.1) I am searching for something on bing (mathias kling p.1) Not very clear...Tomas Urrutia P1) Not very clear but good example (Mariajose Archila P7) I looked at the book which i tuck from mr.cook (laura michelsen p.1) very good example totally understand(lorenza galvis p1) Good example but thats not how you write took... (Tomas Urrutia P1)Like it... check your spellign though... (Daniela Pedraza P.1) I think this is an example of rhyme and not an assonance but for rhyme it is a good example. Chech spelling! (Isabel Boptero P7)  The tortouise told tim to take the ticket (Tomas Urrutia P1) i didnt really get it but good try though try to make the words have an ending ryhme like moose goose it makes it easier to understand (sebastian onoro p.2) I think you are confusing assonance and alliteration! (Isabel Botero P7) I dont understand the asonante maybe you got confused with alliteration like isabel said. (Samuel Fajardo P-7) I lock the door before i go home. (Daniela Pedraza P.1) The o is the vowel repeating, right? (Jack Akerman, Period 3) yes (Pablo Tello P.1) Good, it's a very clear example. (Sam Thomas - Period 3) Pretty clear, good job (Felipe sanchez P-7) i think this is a smart one (Esteban Villegas p.7) someome like the one down town (Pablo Tello P.1) nice! I like the vowels you chose! (Alma Peñate P7) “Fleet feet sweep by sleeping geese” (Alejandro Samper P.3) I like how the e's repeat (Jack Akerman, Period 3) It is assonance but I dont give it any sence (Candelaria P.1) i like how the sound keeps monotonous, reducing confusion. (Felipe sanchez P-7) I see seashells by the seashore (Jack Akerman, Period 3) Ohh, I see... lol (Daniel Moreno P3) I like this example, you can notice the vowels clearly! ( Daniela Cepeda P. 7)you can see the vowels very easily and. Not very original, but good example (Paula Jaramillo P.3) You know what the baker has done?, Yeah of course, Cinnamon Buns!!! (Daniel Moreno P3) Very good daniel the assonance is very clear (Felipe Silva P.1) (Easy to understand and funny Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) That's real funny daniel, it's also a good example of assonance (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3) do you see the moose by the goose? I think he will loose! (Isabel Botero P7) Good example, and its funny (Felipe Sanchez (P-7) its very original (miguel posse p2) I see a flee by the tree ( Daniela Cepeda P. 7 ) It is a good example but Flee is when you run away and flea is the bug (Ashlyn P.7)  Oh, would you choose to love or loose? (camila toro p3) I like this one because of the way of creating the assonance (Candelaria P.!) You can see the vowels very well and it is very creative (MarianneP3) It is very creative, I like it and the assonance is very good! Great job! (Mariajose Archila P7) Very clear! (Daniela Velez P.1)  did you saw that all the baseballs near the wall are small (andres silva p.3) you have an error becasue you instead of saw it should be see (Samuel Fajardo P-7)  I can see a bee in a tree (Candelaria P.1) The assonance is very clear good example (Felipe Silva P.1)  Another ant ate an apple (Ashlyn P.7) Really creative. (Esteban R. P.2) (fun and easy to understand Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) This is good and makes clear sense. (Sam Thomas - Period 3) the Cat grabed the hat and the bat grabbed the mat (Felipe Silva P.1) it id an ok asonance because it is hard to follow. (Sqmuel Fajardo P-7) very good example (carlos Olarte P.8) The simple concepts make the vowels easily seen. (Felipe sanchez P-7) My grandpa has bats ants rats in his sack. (Samuel Fajardo P-7) I like it because it also rhymes at the end of the sentence. (Esteban R. P.2) rhyme and assosance, very good (Pablo Tello P.1) The assonance is very clear (Mariajose Archila P7) Thinking things that turn your thoughts (Ana Maria Samper P.7) I like it and it happens alot! (Esteban R, P.2) I like it and it happens a lot (MarinneP·) I took a nap with the map on my lap. (Alma Peñate P7) Very good example (MariannneP3) Very good example alma it shows assonance really well (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3) Its is a very good example. (Nicolas Triana p3) my cat saw a rat and ran (Esteban Villegas P.7) Air filled with fireflies (Claudia Beltran P.8) It's creative but the repeating of the vowel sound is not so clear. (Maria Pombo P3) While I sanged rap my sister took a nap Ramon. P3 (creative but mispelled Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) Yor example us very creative and clear. {Lorenzo, you misspelled the word misspelled} (Maria Pombo P3)your example is very original and creative (gregory Goldemberg P.3) I like ike (Lorenzo Castellanos P.3) Easy to understand, but not very long or original. (Sam Thomas - Period 3) i think it is original, creative, and cool to say because it is short.. karen levy P2) Can you see the tree? I saw a bee and a flea there. (MarianneP3) Really nice!! (Pablo Tello P.1) i like it a lot specially how you ask the question, very creative and unique (karen levy P2) **It is very clear! (Maria Vernaza P1) umm this is rhyming, not assonance. (Rachel Coombs pd.7) i like it very creative (beatriz pena p.7) **    Em helped the men accept the redhead, who was meant to make beds of lead. (Sam Thomas - Period 3) he couldn't believe that he was beat by the bees (Gregory Goldemberg P.3) The teen, who was next to the tree, had a grean bean. (Mariajose Archila P7) very creative! (sofia aldana p.2) **very good example (Maria Vernaza P1) very unique!! good example!!(tatiana seinjet p.3) very unique i like it (beatriz pena p.7)**  my dog named toffee drank my dads coffe (miguel posse p2) great rhyme. (dan sanclemente, p. 1) I went to the sea, and ate some peas ( felipe mayorga p2 ) jajjajajajaja very funny pipe jajaja (miguel posse p2) great example! creative!!(tatiana seinjet p.3) doesnt make sense but very funny haha (cristina uribe p.7) my cat ate a rat with a hat ( camilo cano p.2) great example (sebastian fernandez p3) good example, creative. (mariana buraglia p.3) Everywhere theres bears eating hares (Daniela Velez P.1) I Like it, the repeating vowel sound is clear. (Maria Pombo P3) **Very good one! (Maria Vernaza P1) the sounds of the vowels are pretty clear (cristina uribe) Very good example (miguel samper p1)** It's cool when you can see the moon at noon. (Maria Pombo P3) Great example you can clearly see this is assonance (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3) great example and makes sense! (cristina u. p.7) i don't think that will ever happen in real life (mathias kling p.1) good example (esteban Villegas p.7) the hat owned a tall bat. (mathias kling p.1) The Clown went down town (Pedro Juan Mesa P.3) jajaja good one (miguel posse p2) good one! very clear!(tatina seinjet p.3) good one can clearly see it. (beatriz pena p.7) jaja nice one(sebastian fernandez p3)jajjajaja very original and great example(gregory goldemberg P.3) **I live in little Italy (Maria Vernaza P1)verve been there! (Mateo Osorio p.7)** I've been there in New York. (Nicolas Triana p3) thats a cool place (Esteban Villegas p.7) **proud round cloud(tatiana seinjet p.3) very good, it is very easy to see the assonance (mariana buraglia P.3)** The words atom and fathom. (Rachel Coombs pd.7) the fantom of the opera. (Mateo Osorio p.7)oh good one !(migel samper p1) i saw a mini pug inside a mug (beatriz pena p.7) very funny and good example Tomas urrutia p.1) hahahaahha I have the mental picture (Mateo Osorio p.7) very funny(sebastian fernandez p3)very creative and it has a good rhyme also(Gregory Goldemberg P.3) very cute and it works. (dan sanclemente, p. 1) funny and original good job (lorwenzo sanchez p4) very funny (mathias kling p.1) He made a low bow to acknowledge the audience applause. (Paula Jaramillo P.3) i like it very easy to see the assonance (mariana buraglia P.3) Season of mists and mellow fruitfulness. (mariana buraglia p.3) The car got in the park. (Mateo Osorio p.7) A little confusing mateo, but I tihnk you could consider that an assonance (lorenzo muñoz P7) the frail glace trailed on the glade (debastian fernandez(p3) I like the city lights in the country of Iran. (Nicolas Triana p3) The batter ran at all bases (Felipe sanchez P-7) nice and very clear tomas urrutia p.1) Good one, Felipe. You can hear the a vowel assonance. (dan sanclemente, p.1) Fabulous, meticulous, but frankly, of very little use! (dan sanclemente, p.1) nice and creative tomas urrutia p.1) The bat in a hat hates cats (Miguel Samper P1) I also hate cats good one! (Juliana Laborde p.3) the ball had a tall hat as a bat tomas urrutia p1 very well done and really similar to mine (mathias kling p.1) Long and interesting thought put into it I like it! (Juliana Laborde p.3 I lie by the side of my bride (sophie steckerl p 7) Thats what we all think ;) Good one creative deeper meaning to it. (Juliana Laborde p.3) Should I, Could I, would I,? (juliana Laborde p.3)